Question

    假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线( \)画掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:

1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

My mother is the kind and nice woman. So she is very strict with me. One Sunday night, when I was watched the film Harry Potter , my mother asked me to go to bed. I loved the fim very much, so I didn’t move. After a while, I noticed that she didn’t say something. Then she got angry and turned on the TV. I was very sad and entered into my room. I thought, “I have only two nights in a week watch TV. Shouldn’t I enjoy it freely?" The next day, she cooked and talked with me as usually. I pretended not to hear, but she didn’t mind and tell me she wanted me to have a good rest. Then I understood hers. I love my mother.

Answer

1. the改为a

2. So改为But

3. watched改为watching

4. something改为anything

5. on改为off

6. 删除into

7. watch改为to watch

8. usually改为usual

9. tell改为told

10. hers改为her

【解析】

文章大意：我妈妈是一个善良、和蔼的女人，但她对我要求很严格。一个星期天的晚上，我正在电视上看自己最喜欢的电影《哈利波特》，她让我去睡觉，但我没有动。然后妈妈生气了，直接把电视机关掉了。我很伤心的走进了自己的房间。第二天，妈妈像往常一样为我做饭、和我聊天，但我假装没听见。可妈妈并不介意，还告诉我说她不让我看电视是想让我好好休息一下。我理解了妈妈的用心，我爱我的妈妈。

1. My mother is the kind and nice woman.句中的定冠词the，改为不定冠词a；根据句意可知此处表示的是泛指，而且kind是以辅音音素开头的单词，所以用a修饰；故答案为the改为a。

2. So she is very strict with me.句中的So，改为But；根据上文，结合下文可知前后句之间表示的是转折关系，所以用but连接，因其位于句首，首字母要大写，故答案为So改为But。

3. when I was watched the film Harry Potter ,句中的watched，改为watching；根据题干可知，此处是过去进行时态，即was/were+动词的现在分词，故答案为watched改为watching。

4. I noticed that she didn’t say something.句中的something，改为anything；由didn’t可知本句为否定句，而something一般用于肯定句，anything一般用于否定句和疑问句，故答案为something改为anything。

5. Then she got angry and turned on the TV.句中的on，改为off；根据上文she got angry，可知应是“关闭”了电视机，turn on打开，turn off关闭，故答案为on改为off。

6. I was very sad and entered into my room.句中的into，删除；enter是及物动词,后面直接跟宾语，不需要加介词into，故答案为删除into。

7. I have only two nights in a week watch TV.句中watch前面需要加介词to；have time to do sth.有时间去做某事,固定搭配，故答案为watch改为to watch。

8. The next day, she cooked and talked with me as usually.句中的usually，改为usual；根据句意可知是第二天，她像往常一样为我做饭，和我聊天。as usual 是一个固定词组，意为“像往常一样”，不能随便改，没有as usually这种形式，故答案为usually改为usual。

9. but she didn’t mind and tell me she wanted me to have a good rest.句中的tell，改为told；and连接两个并列成分，本句中是连接两个并列的谓语动词，由前面的didn’t mind可知句子时态为一般过去时，所以tell应用其过去式told，故答案为tell改为told。

10. Then I understood hers.句中的hers，改为her；understood是understand的过去式，在句中充当谓语，后面接代词宾格作宾语，hers是名词性的物主代词，其宾格形式为her，故答案为hers改为her。