Question

    在日常学习和生活中，你一定得到过很多人的帮助和关爱，此时此刻你会有很多感谢的话要说。请根据下面所给的提示用英语写一篇短文。

要点如下：

1、感谢的人：亲人、老师、同学；

2、感谢他们的原因：生活方面、学习方面；

3、对他们的美好祝福。

要求：

1、内容包括所给提示，字数80~100；

2、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3、文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；

4、开头已给出，不计入总词数。

In my life, I get lots of help and love from many people. Now, I want to express my thanks to them.

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Answer

One possible version:

In my life, I get lots of help and love from many people. Now I want to express my thanks to them.

First, I want to thank my parents. They provide a happy life for me. They do much for me and give me so much love. Second, I want to thank my teachers. They are hard-working. When I have problems with my study, they are so patient and helpful. Third, I want to thank my classmates. They make me feel less lonely. I will remember the days when we play and study together.

Thank you, my parents, my teacher and my classmates. I hope you are in good health and have a better future.

【解析】

1. 题干解读：该题目属于材料性写作，在写作时要根据所给的材料具体的描写。第一段承接短文开头，第二段叙述具体要感谢的人以及理由；第三段祝福并给予期望。

2. 写作指导：本文应该采用一般现在时为主，叙述感恩的人以及具体的事情，要选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。在感谢具体的人时可以采用表达顺序的词描写，使文章层次分明，条理清晰。