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    假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10初语言错误,每句中最多有两处。对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正:

    删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。

    增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符合(^),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

    修改:在错的词下划—横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

    注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

          2.至允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Christine was just a girl in one of my class. I never knew much about

her except for that she was strange. she didn’t talk many .her hair was black 

and purple, and she worn black sports shoes and a black sweater ,although  in the

summer .she was ,in fact, rather attractively, and she never seemed ^care what

the rest if us thought about her like the rest of my classmate ,I didn’t really

want to get closest to her . it was only when we did their chemistry project

together that I begin to understand why Christine dressed the way she did .

 

Christine was just a girl in one of my class. I never knew much about her except for that she was strange. she didn’t talk many .her hair was black  解析:except that中不能再用for。                                               much 解析:修饰动词talk应该用much,此处是副词,many没有此用法。 and purple, and she worn black sports shoes and a black sweater ,although  in the                   wore解析:谓语动词用过去式,不能用过去分词                                      even 解析:although是连词,不能修饰介词短语,even可以 summer .she was ,in fact, rather attractively, and she never seemed ^care what                              attractive解析:做表语,用形容词   to 解析:seem后用带to的不定式 the rest if us thought about her like the rest of my classmate ,I didn’t really                                                 classmates 解析:名词需用复数 want to get closest to her . it was only when we did their chemistry project                                   close 解析get是连系动词,后跟形容词 our解析:人称和前面一致  together that I begin to understand why Christine dressed the way she did .                 begin  解析:时态前后不一致  
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