假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单词的增加、删除或修改。
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删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
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2 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
Generally, we prefer to do things the way we considered to be the best．
However, it is important to listen to those who love us and want to give us an
advice when we have serious problems in our lives．Parents have gained some
life experiences and they know what to act in different situations．That's why
we should ask them for help first when they have problems．Therefore, there
are moments when we avoid them and don't want to follow them．With time
passed, my brother as well as I have realized that our parents are right．Please
turn for your parents when in trouble, for they worth trusting and ready to
offer help all the time．
根据短文内容，从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项，选项中有两项为多余选项。
※※注意：此题在答题卡上作答，如选E涂AD、如选F涂BD，如选G涂CD。
1. Well，maybe you don’t really hate him . But you do get really angry every time you think of him．If you don't overcome this anger，it can turn into bitterness(痛苦).
Bitterness can result when we can't forgive someone who has hurt us or made us angry．Someone might say or do something that hurts us． 2. Before long，a bitter feeling begins to grow．The bitterness shows when we constantly criticize the one who hurts us．We may think we’re hurting that person，but we’re really only hurting ourselves．
3. It can lead to serious health problems such as high blood pressure．Bitterness can keep us from concentrating on important things．Finally，holding on to bitterness can hurt our relationships with friends and family members．No one enjoys being around an angry, negative person for a long time ．
Author Chuck Swindoll once said, “Life is 10％ what happens to us and 90％ how we respond to it.” 4. You can choose to 1et go of hurt , or you can hold on to hurt，which results in bitterness．
If you see bitterness in your life, the best thing you can do is to forgive and forget .You probably can’t completely put the anger out of your mind．5. Let it go and move on．You’ll enjoy better health and peace of mind．
A. Is there something you hate ?
B. That means when someone hurts you , your response is more important than what happened .
C. But instead of working through the anger, we keep it deep inside.
D. Is there someone you hate ?
E. Bitterness is a harmful emotion that affects the whole body．
F. But you can decide to forgive the other person．
G. We should never hate others .
Five years ago, Wang Baoqiang was a nobody to most Chinese people. However, he is now a household film star in China.
Wang is the youngest child of a poor family in Hebei province . Dreaming of becoming an actor, he left home at the age of 8 to study kung fu at Shaolin Temple, since kung-fu actors seemed to appear most often on the big screen.
At 14, he moved to Beijing for his acting career for the first time, with little money in his pocket. He worked at a construction site（建筑工地）for 20 to 25 yuan per day, and spent his free time standing in front of the Beijing Film Studio, eager to be chosen as temporary（临时的）actors.
This was the most difficult time for the boy. His opportunity finally came one day after he went for a role in the movie “Blind Shaft”. He was chosen to play a young coal miner. The movie won him three prizes in Thailand, France and Taiwan. But his success didn’t make any difference to his life.
That year, he went home for the Spring Festival. He gave his family his earnings from the movie, around US$250 and then returned to Beijing with 500 yuan, the same amount he had when he first set foot in the city. His life was as simple as before.
Thanks
to his natural performance in “Blind Shaft,” he was invited by the famous director Feng Xiaogang to act in
the film “A World Without Thieves” in 2004, which made him famous
immediately. People called him “Shagen,” the name of his character in the movie.
Wang’s latest work, “Soldiers’ Sortie” has made him the most popular actor on the Chinese mainland . For the actor, it’s a dream coming true.
“Dreams come true. I think my life is exactly a course of pursuing（追求）dreams. No matter how tough one thing is, I can make it as long as I put great effort into it,” he said.
1. Why does Wang Baoqiang leave for Shaolin Temple at his early age ?
A. To study kungfu to build up his strength .
B. He has seen through the human society .
C. To realize his childhood dream to be an actor .
D. To make money in support of his family .
2.Which of the following films made him win three prizes ?
A. A World Without Thieves B. Soldiers’ Sortie .
C. Plot Against D. Blind Shaft
3.What would be the best title for this passage ?
A. The Movies about Wang Baoqiang B. Pursuing Dreams
C. How to Become Famous D. Overnight Well-known
Goals can help you do，be and experience everything you want in life．Instead of just letting life happen to you，goals allow you to make your life happen．
Successful and happy people have an idea of how their life should be and they set lots of goals to help them succeed．By setting goals you are taking control of your life．It’ s like having a map to show you where you want to go．Think of it this way．There are two drivers．One has a destination in mind which is laid out for her on a map．She can drive straight there without any wasted time or wrong turns．The other driver has no goal or destination or map．She starts off at the same time from the same place as the first driver，but she drives without an aim around，never getting anywhere，just using up gas and oil．Which driver do you want to be？
Winners in life set goals and follow through on them．Winners decide what they want in life and then get there by making plans and setting goals．Unsuccessful people just let life happen by accident．Goals aren’t difficult to set―and they aren’t difficult to reach．It’s up to you to find out what your goals and ideals（理想）really are．
Research tells us that when we write a goal down，we are more likely to achieve．Written goals can be reviewed regularly，and have more power．Like a contract with yourself，they are harder to neglect（忽视）or forget．Also when you write your goals in a particular way，you are able to make yourself continuously alert（警觉）to situations that will further your goals．
1.The writer gave the example of two drivers to show__________．
A．how stupid the first driver was
B．the importance of having a map and right direction
C．how stupid the second driver was
D．the importance of setting goals
2.According to the passage，successful people are different from unsuccessful ones because
_________．
A．the successful people set goals for everything and can get help from others
B．the unsuccessful people always set unrealistic plans for themselves
C．the successful people set goals in their lives and make plans to carry it out
D．the unsuccessful people make plans for everything but can not work hard
3.Which of the following is TRUE according to the passage？
A．Goals can make you gain everything you want in life.
B．Only successful people can be happy.
C．If you want to succeed，you need to set long-term goals instead of short-term Goals.
D．When we put our goal down on papers，we are more likely to succeed.
4.Which is the best title for the passage?
A．Goals help you succeed B．How to succeed
C．Why we always fail D．A research on setting goals
When the six very best students from different cities in Guangdong Province all together chose universities in Hong Kong ; when the very best students of Beijing picked up HK University while giving up the nearby Peking or Tsinghua University ; when the highest enrollment(录取) rate of Hong Kong Science and Industry University reached 48:1, it’s the high time to ask where the real education heaven for students in China is.
Years ago, the answer certainly would be “Peking or Tsinghua University”. But now no one could give the exact answer without hesitation . The only sure thing is that HK universities have gradually showed an unusual attraction to a great many mainland students.
There’s no doubt to call this HK craze (狂热), which is even out of the expectation of those HK universities themselves.
How can HK universities shake the steady foundations of Peking and Tsinghua University and attract so many mainland students?
First, Hong Kong universities offer large-amount scholarship, especially for the top students who can receive the scholarship as much as 400,000 HK dollars. Since higher education has become a kind of heavy burden of many families, it’s easy to understand why the reaction to the generous offering of HK universities is great.
Second, most HK universities receive professors and students from all over the world and carry out bilingual (双语) education. This kind of excellent language atmosphere is another attraction for mainland students.
Furthermore, university students in Hong Kong have a better chance to study abroad as exchange students.
Can mainland top universities like Peking or Tsinghua University be calm as before when facing the unexpected competition from HK? Will they take relevant measures to win back the top students who once help them set the worldwide reputation? Time will explain it .
The fierce competition brought by HK universities can be a good thing for an entire improvement of education in China. After the awakening and action-taking of mainland universities , they can perform better together with HK universities.
At least, it reminded the mainland universities the tuition fees (学费) are among students’ top concern when they are choosing universities . It’s time to move.
1.What is the passage mainly talking about?
A. Some thoughts brought by the enrollment of HK universities.
B. Higher education in Hong Kong.
C. The competition between HK University and Beijing University.
D. The fall of mainland universities.
2.Top students from mainland apply for HK universities because________.
A. many students now would love to study abroad to get a better experience
B. they concern only about the tuition fees when choosing universities
C. HK Universities offer higher scholarship, better environment and more opportunities for their further study
D. Beijing University has lost its worldwide reputation
3. From the passage we can see HK universities________.
A. didn’t mean to enroll top students from mainland
B. didn’t expect their enrollment of mainland students would be so popular
C. have strict enrollment rules and only 1 out of 48 students can get the chance to study there
D. are proud of their teaching staff and facilities.
4.What does the author mean by saying “It’s time to move .” in the last paragraph ?
A. Mainland universities should take measures as soon as possible to attract students.
B. The opportunities come for top students to study abroad .
C. Mainland universities should make full preparations to enroll Hong Kong students .
D. Top students should be offered further education free of charge .
Weddings in the United States vary as much as the people do. There are church weddings with a great deal of fanfare（仪式上用的短曲）; there are weddings on mountain-tops with guests barefooted (赤脚的); and there have been weddings on the ocean floor with oxygen tanks for the guests. But many weddings, no matter where or how they are performed, include certain traditional customs.
Before a couple is married, they become engaged. And then invitations are sent to those who live nearby, their close friends and their relatives who live far away. When everything is ready, then comes the most exciting moment.
The wedding itself usually lasts between 20 and 40 minutes. The wedding party enters the church while the wedding march is played. The bride carrying a bouquet （花束）enters last with her father who will "give her away ". The bridegroom enters the church from a side door. When the wedding party is gathered by the altar, the bride and bridegroom exchange vows (誓言). It is traditional to use the words "To have and to hold from this day forward, for better, for worse, for richer, for poorer, in sickness and in health, to love and to cherish, till death do us part ". Following the vows, the couple exchange rings. Wearing the wedding ring on the fourth finger of the left hand is an old custom.
After the ceremony there is often a party, called a "reception" which gives the wedding guests an opportunity to congratulate the new couple . The car in which the couple leaves the church is decorated with balloons, streamers and shaving cream. The words "Just Married" are painted on the trunk or back window. The bride and bridegroom run to the car under a shower of rice thrown by the wedding guests. When the couple drives away from the church, friends often chase them in cars, honking (鸣汽车喇叭)and drawing attention to them. And then the couple go on their honeymoon.
1.This passage is written mainly to let us know something about _______ .
A. health and lifestyle B. science and technology
C. culture and custom D. education and entertainment
2.Why do the wedding guests throw a lot of rice at the bride and bridegroom when they run to the car ?
A. To wish them good luck . B. To make fun of them.
C. Not mentioned . D. To draw attention to them .
3.Which of the following is TRUE of American weddings ?
A. They are always held in churches whoever they are .
B. The bride’s father is usually present to lead his daughter to the bridegroom and give her to him .
C. Only bridegrooms send rings to brides .
D. Brides needn’t make vows before bridegrooms .
4.Which of the following is the correct order in which the following events happen ?
a. sending invitation b. going on honeymoon
c. attending the wedding d. giving a reception
e. getting engaged
A. e-b-c-d-a B. e-c-d-a-b C. b-c-d-a-e D. e-a-c-d-b
