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On a snowy winter night,a bus with 45 passenger had an accident because of the wet road.And all of them were trapping in the bus and what was worse,the bus ran out of gas and it is very cold in it.They could do nothing but to wait for help.A man who lived nearby saw what happened.He and some villagers managed to open the door and helped all of them out of bus.He took them to his home but offered food and water and even some warm clothes to the children.They spent two days in their home and finally helps came.All of them were thankful with his help.
1.I believe that it is good to ask (挑战性的) questions often.
2.You can put your (私人) things in the next room.
3.The expert is going to give out some (问卷) forms to collect the opinions.
4.Would you please tell me how many (志愿者) will be sent to Zhouqu for rebuilding?
5.She spent a (宁静的)afternoon by the river,reading a novel.
6.It is the ability that m (很重要),not where you come from or what you are.
7.The police officer is carrying out an important task (附近的)the railway station.
8.Though it happened in the (遥远的)past, I can remember very clearly today.
9.The new patient is in (紧急的)need of medical attcntion.
10.Teaching can be a tiring and (紧张的)job,but I still love it.
11.The new model of the car (设计) by the engineer is popular with the youth.
12.To build a road in the mountainous area was a real c .
13.A helps to sell goods although something is false in it.
14.Zhang Yimou created many famous (角色) in his films.
15. (就自己而言), I prefer walking to going there by bus.
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When I was 16 years old,a boy gave me an important gift. 1
It was the early autumn of my first year at a junior high school,and my old school was far away. 2 I was very lonely,and afraid to make friends with anyone.
Every time I heard the other students talking and laughing,I felt my heart broken.I couldn’t talk with anyone about my problems.And I didn’t want my parents to worry about me.
Then one day,my classmates talked happily with their friends,but I sat at my desk unhappily as usual.
3 I didn’t know who he was.He passed me and then turned back.He looked at me,with a smile on his face.
Suddenly,I felt the touch of something bright and friendly.It made me feel happy,lively and warm.
4 I started to talk with other students and made friends.Day by day,I became closer to everyone in my class.The boy with the lucky smile has become my best friend now !
5 I believe that the world is what you think it is.If you think it lonely,you might always be alone.So smile at the world and it will smile back.
A.At that moment,a boy entered the classroom.
B.He’s living in Australia now and he loves it.
C.It doesn’t matter because all the dark days have gone.
D.It was a smile.
E.That smile changed my life.
F.It’s practically impossible to make friends here.
G.As a result,no one knew who I was.
Some 80 percent of graduate students in East China’s Zhejiang Province said in a survey they will give up trying to find jobs in Beijing,Shanghai and Guangzhou,first-tier cities in China that have been considered dream places for many,because of the untouchable home prices and high living costs.
The Yangtse Evening Post conducted the survey among 50 job seekers who were attending Sunday’s job fair in Jiangsu for graduate students.The survey showed graduates are becoming more realistic in their job search despite the job market becoming better.
The fair attracted more than 10,000 graduate students with 7,382 positions.
“The pressure of buying a house in Beijing is unbelievable,”said Wang Jian from Nanjiing Normal University,who acknowledged he had thought about finding a job in Beijing,Shanghai or Guangzhou,but in the face of huge pressures,he has no choice but to be “realistic”.
People can have a very comfortable life in Nanjing with a monthly salary of between 3,000 yuan($450)and 4,000 yuan,but in Shanghai,5,000 yuan a month can only help you survive and buying a house will remain a dream.
A student from Nanjing University of Science and Technology said he just turned down an offer from a Shanghai company of 7,000 yuan a month because“living costs in Shanghai are too high.”
An unnamed male student from Nanjing University said he will try first-tier cities only if he can get a high salary.“I would go to Beijing only if I can earn 200,000 yuan a year,”he said.
“Beijing,Shanghai and Guangzhou once had the advantages that other cities don’t have,but the high housing prices and living costs make young people barely able to breathe,”said Ren Leiming from the job service center of Jiangsu’s colleges and universities.
“First-tier cities have plenty of talents that make it hard for people to be outstanding,and if you go work in smaller cities you can become a dominant player at your position much more easily,”said Ren.
1.The majority of graduate students will give up trying to find jobs in the first-tier cities because .
A.it is not easy to find jobs there.
B.home prices and living costs there are very high.
C.they can’t make full use of their knowledge and skills there.
D.monthly salaries there are low compared with those in other cities.
2.Which of the following statements is TRUE about the job market now?
A.There are more job opportunities offered now.
B.The job markets are becoming more and more competitive.
C.Many graduate students aren’t satisfied with the working conditions.
D.Companies and enterprises have stricter rules to take in graduate students.
3.We can learn from the news report that .
A.in Shanghai,5,000 yuan a month can only help you buy a luxury house
B.the fair attracted more than 10,000 graduate students and laid-off workers with 7,382 positions
C.The Yangtse Evening Post conducted the survey among 50 personnel managers who were attending Sunday’s joh fair in Jiangsu for graduate students
D.a student from Nanjing University of Science and Technology turned down an offer from a Shanghai company of 7,000 yuan a month
4.The words Ren said in the last paragraph mean .
A.people can’t achieve more in first-tier cities
B.people can easily be outstanding in smaller cities
C.he would rather go to first-tier cities than smaller cities
D.talents are more welcome in first-tier cities than smaller ones
Americans love to talk and generally it is OK to talk even to strangers about nearly any subject at any time as long as you are polite.However there are some subjects,like racism,American foreign policy,gun ownership,and religion that are best discussed among friends.
In America,it is OK to approach a stranger and start up a conversation with him as long as the subject is not too abstract.In America,it is not considered inappropriate to talk to people you don’t know.Talking to a stranger about the weather or the quality of nearby restaurants,or the prices in a grocery store is all perfectly fine.Even complimenting someone on the car they drive or asking them where they bought their clothes are all appropriate topics of conversation with complete strangers.
Generally,Americans prefer that people say what they think and they respect frankness.Usually when it comes to personal matters,it’s best to accentuate(强调)the positive:don’t tell someone that their children are ugly or that their cooking is terrible.However;it’s OK to tell someone that they are wrong as long as you do so politely and with respect.Americans generally believe that you show someone respect by telling them the truth.Don’t be afraid to be honest with Americans,but be appropriate.
Most Americans will start a conversation with a person they just met by asking them what they do for a living.This question is not only considered appropriate by Americans,but it’s also considered an important way to learn about someone.
1.The passage mainly tells us .
A.how to make friends with Americans
B.how to make proper conversations with Americans
C.what Americans like to talk about in their dailv life
D.what to avoid in talking with Americans
2.When you talk to an American for the first time,you can ask him the following questions EXCEPT “ ”.
A.How does America treat other countries
B.Where did you buy your wonderful car
C.What do you do
D.How is the dessert the nearby restaurant offers
3.When you find that an American has made a mistake, you’d better .
A.point it out directly and politely
B.pretend not to see it
C.tell his friends about this
D.cover it up for him
Science can’t explain the power of pets,but many studies have shown that the company of pets can help lower blood pressure(血压) and raise chances of recovering from a heart attack,reduce loneliness and spread all-round good cheer.
Any owner will tell you how much joy a pet brings.For some.an animal provides more comfort than a husband/wife.A 2002 study by Karen Allen of the State University of New York measured stress(紧张)1evels and blood pressure in people-half of them pet owners-while they performed 5 minutes of mental arithmetic(算术)or held a hand in ice water.Subjects completed the tasks alone,with a husband/wife,a close friend or with a pet.People with pets did it best.Those tested with their animal friends had smaller change in blood pressure and returned most quickly to baseline heart rates.With pets in the room,people also made fewer math mistakes than when doing in front of other companions.It seems people feel more relaxed(放松)around pets,says Allen,who thinks it may be because pets don’t judge.
A study reported last fall suggests that having a pet dog not only raises your spirits but may also have an effect on your eating habits.Researchers at Northwestern Memorial Hospital spent a year studying 36 fat people and their equally fat dogs on diet-and-exercise programs;a separate group of 56 people without pets were put on a diet program.On average,people lost about 11 pounds,or 5% of their body weight.Their dogs did even better,losing an average of 12 pounds,more than 15%of their body weight.Dog owners didn’t lose any more weight than those without dogs but,say researchers,got more exercise overall-mostly with their dogs--and found it worth doing.
1.What does the text mainly discuss?
A.What pets bring to their owners.
B.How pets help people calm down.
C.People’s opinions of keeping pets.
D.Pet’s value in medical research.
2.We 1earn from the text that a person with heart disease has a better chance of getting well if .
A.he has a pet companion
B.he has less stress of work
C.he often does mental arithmetic
D.he is taken care of by his family
3.According to Allen,why did the people do better with pets around when facing stressful tasks?
A.They have lower blood pressure.
B.They become more patient.
C.They are less nervous.
D.They are in higher spirits.
4.The research mentioned in the last paragraph reports that .
A.people with dogs did more exercise
B.dogs lost the same weight as people did
C.dogs liked exercise much more than people did
D.people without dogs found the program unhelpful