Question

假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该词下面写出该加的词。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。

2、只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。

Boys and girls, welcome to Elite Secondary School! I’m Mr. Green, in charge of this school. I’d like to introduce you to various aspect of our school, from our history to our buildings and activities. Elite Secondary School set up in 1960. In the past fifty years, Elite had experienced a lot of changes and developments. Our school finally decided to move to Aberdeen in 1990, due to the lack of the space. The school campus now was almost three times larger than the previous one. We even have three libraries which are available with all the teachers and students. As for laboratories, they have two Physics labs, two Chemistry labs, and a Biology lab which was established last year. Students here always have an enjoyable time at school because there is a widely range of extra-curricular activities for them to choose. We try to provide as much activities for our students as possible. Elite Secondary School is committed to providing the highest level of education to the children. Thank you for your time.

Answer

Boys and girls, welcome to Elite Secondary School! I’m Mr. Green, in

charge of this school. I’d like to introduce you to various aspect of our

1.aspects

school, from our history to our buildings and activities. Elite Secondary

School▽ set up in 1960. In the past forty years, Elite had experienced

2.was                                 3.has

a lot of changes and developments. Our school finally decided to move to

Aberdeen in 1990, due to the lack of the space. The school campus now

4. 去掉the

was almost three times larger than the previous one. We even have three

5.is

libraries which are available with all the teachers and students. As for

6.to

laboratories, they have two Physics labs, two Chemistry labs, and a

7.we

Biology lab which was established last year. Students here always have

an enjoyable time at school because there is a widely range of

8.wide

extra-curricular activities for them to choose▽. We try to provide as

9.加from

much activities for our students as possible. Elite Secondary School is

10.many

committed to providing the highest level of education to the children. Thank you for your time.

【解析】

 前面有various修饰，故应将aspect改为aspects.

 学校是被建立的，故应用被动，加was.

 根据前面的In the past forty years，可知应用现在完成时，故had改为has.

 space空间，不可数名词。这里没有特指什么空间，故无需加the.

 因为有时间状语now，故应用一般现在时。

 be available to固定短语。

 根据前面We even have three libraries，可知，这是第一人称。

 wide可以做形容词，而widely是副词，故用wide.

 有很多课外活动可供选择，故不是之间choose activities, 而是choose from activities.

 activities是复数形式，不能赢Much修饰。