Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）。并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。

Nowadays, as the development of the Internet, there is a kind of language calling Web Language．Some people even speak Chinese mixed with English letters．Recently our class have had a discussion about if we should welcome the Web Language．

40％ of the students think it ridiculous．In their opinions, it does no good to help people communicate, nor is it useful for learning English, Besides, it’ll make Chinese more standard and pure, finally ruining our mother tongue．

However, 60% of our class is fond of it．They think it is simple, convenient and helpful in expressing them．What’s more, it may make the language more interesting．

Personally, it’s not good habit to use the Web Language．It may be popular, but you may also make yourself be misunderstood．

Answer

 as改成 with

 calling改成  called

 if改成 whether

 opinions改成  opinion

 help改成 helping

 more改成 less

 is改成 are

 them改成 themselves

 not后面加a

 去掉be

【解析】

 as 是连词，连接的是句子，with是介词，“随着…的发展”with the development of …;

 called过去分词作后置定语，表被动。

 介词后面表是否不能用if,而是whether.

 in one’s opinion是个固定短语，不需用复数。

 此处的to是介词，不是不定式，故用helping.

 网络语言使得汉语更不规范，而不是更规范。

 class是个集体名词，当指“个体”的时候，表示“班级中的同学”。所以是复数。

 表达他们自己的思想，故用反身代词。

 It is a good habit to do sth.是个固定句型。

 make oneself misunderstood 使得自己被误解。过去分词做宾补。