Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修干作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的次下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1、       每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。 2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

If you walk around in some public places, you will notice most of smokers are young people

and some are still middle school students . It is said that in China the number of people smoking

are about 45% . Why do so many people smoke? Some think smoking gives themselves pleasure.

Some even think that smoking can refresh them. In the fact, smoking is a bad habit that makes

great harm to people’s health . Studies of smoking shows that many kinds of diseases have   anything to do with smoking. Smoking itself is a waste, that costs one so much money. Besides

, many fires are often causing by careless smokers. Today more and more people all over the

world want to give up smoking . If you are not a smoker, never start.

Answer

If you walk around in some public places, you will notice most of smokers are young people

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and some are still middle school students . It is said that in China the number of people smoking

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are about 45% . Why do so many people smoke ? Some think smoking gives themselves

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pleasure. Some even think that smoking can refresh them . In the fact ,smoking is a bad habit that

                                                  the 去掉（固定词组in fact）

makes great harm to people’s health . Studies of smoking shows that many kinds of diseases have   

does                                           show(主语是studies)

anything to do with smoking. Smoking itself is a waste , that costs one so much money . Besides, 

something                                      which(非象征性定语从句不能用that引导)

many fires are often causing by careless smokers . Today more and more people all over the

                 caused（被动语态使用过去分词）

world want to give up smoking . If you are not a smoker , never start .

【解析】同上