Question

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线（ ），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Brown,

Last summer I take a part-time job in the International Camp for children. I have been told one more worker will be needed in this year and I think you are fit to it. How about join us? The camp is at the foot of a small hill close to a river. It is so a beautiful place! We can hear birds singing happy all around. Everybody sleeps in tents, that is very exciting. We usually work only five hours a day, so we will have plenty of spare time visit the area and have a fun. I am sure it will be an unforgettable experience. If you are interesting in it, reply to me soon．

Yours, 

Li Hua  

Answer

 take – took

 去掉in

 to – for

 join – joining

 so – such

 happy – happily

 that – which   

 visit前加to

 去掉a      

 interesting – interested

【解析】

 根据last summer可知这里使用过去时。

 this year 在句中单独做时间状语。

 固定词组be fit for适合。

 about是介词，后面要接动名词或者名词。

 后面名词短语a beautiful place，用such。So后面接形容词或者副词。

 修饰动词使用副词。

 that不能引导非限制性定语从句。

 根据句意可知是有很多空闲时间来参观这一地区，不定式表示目的。

 fun是不可数名词。

 固定词组be interested in对…感兴趣。