假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线/ 划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
Dear Aunt,
I am unhappy now, and I don’t know how I should do. Mary and I got to know each other through English chat-room. Since then, we have had chatted online almost every night. We have many in common as we are both girls at the same age. We would like to tell each other many things which are kept secretly to others. I will feel uncomfortable unless I can’t find her online. Besides, she told me two days ago that she would go abroad soon. She insisted that she would get good education abroad than at home. I know it is wrong for her to think so, but I don’t know how to change his mind. Would you help me?
Yours,
Li Lin
Taking good notes is a time-saving skill that will help you to become a better student in several ways . 71 .Second , your notes are excellent materials to refer to when you are studying for a test . Third, note-taking offers variety to your study time and helps you to hold your interest .
You will want to take notes during classroom discussions and while reading a textbook or doing research for a report .72 Whenever or however you take notes, keep in mind that note-taking is a selective process.73
The following methods may work best for you.
·Read the text quickly to find the main facts and ideas in it.
·Carefully read the text and watch for words that can show main points and supporting facts.
·Write your notes in your own words.
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·Note any questions or ideas you may have about what was said or written.
As you take notes ,you may want to use your own shorthand (速记). When you do, be sure that you understand your symbols and that you use them all the time. 75
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A．Use words, not complete sentences. |
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B．There are three practical note-taking methods. |
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C．You must write your notes on separate paper. |
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D．Otherwise, you may not be able to read your notes later. |
E. You will also want to develop your own method for taking notes.
F. That means you must first decide what is important enough to include in your notes.
G.. First, the simple act of writing something down makes it easier for you to understand and remember it.
Do’s and Don’ts in Whale(鲸)Watching
The Department of Fisheries and Oceans has developed guidelines for whale watching in Johnstone Strait,where killer whales are found on a daily basis each summer. It is strongly recommended that vessel(船只)operators follow these guidelines for all kinds of whales.
● Approach whales from the side, not from the front or the back.
● Approach no closer than 100 metres, then stop the boat but keep the engine on.
● Keep noise levels down-no horns, whistles or racing of engines.
● Start your boat only after the whales are more than 100 metres from your vessel.
● Leave the area slowly, gradually moving faster when you are more than 300 metres from the whales.
● Approach and leave slowly, avoiding sudden changes in speed or direction.
● Avoid disturbing groups of resting whales.
● Keep at low speeds and remain in the same direction if travelling side by side with whales.
● When whales are travelling close to shore, avoid crowding them near the shore or coming between the whales and the shore.
● Limit the time spent with any group of whales to less than 30 minutes at a time when within 100 to 200 metres of whales.
● If there is more than one vessel at the same observation spot, be sure to avoid any boat position that would result in surrounding the whales.
● Work together by communicating with other vessels, and make sure that all operators are aware of the whale watching guidelines.
1.For whom is this text written?
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A．Tour guides. |
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B．Whale watchers. |
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C．Vessel operators. |
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D．Government officials. |
2.When leaving the observation areas, the vessel should ________________.
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A．move close to the beach |
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B．increase speed gradually |
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C．keep its engine running slowly |
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D．remain at the back of the whales |
3.What is the shortest safe distance from the whales?
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A．400 metres. |
B．300 metres. |
C．200 metres. |
D．100 metres. |
Friendship is very pleasant and also essential to people’s life . A man without friends is an angel without wings, whose life will suffer in the long loneliness and depression, Friendship is the mother of our spirit, who’ll warm her kid when hurt occures , We have much to share with our friends in life , confusion, excitement ,bitterness etc, It’s great to keep up a sincere friendship.
It takes many special qualities to make friends, Understanding should come first . Only when we get a better understanding of each other can we gain a believable and meaningful friendship. We may find our hobbies of common interest. This feeling of natural attraction gets us closer and closer.
It also takes a special kind of love that seems to know no end, Never hesitate to show your heartfelt care and kindness to your friend when she /he is in trouble . Love is not selfish , Love is a feeling that we should treasure all our lives,
Tolerance （宽容）is the third necessary part in friendship ,. We are absolutely different persons , This individual difference may cause conflict between us in every aspect of our life. Don’t care yourself too much . Try to tolerate him /her in an easy mood , Saints （圣人）are not perfect , let alone those ordinary people like us. Afterwards, we should get a good communication.
Understanding , love and tolerance are the first three essences that come to a true friendship. Other qualities are also concerned such a s thoughtfulness, trust and patience, Remember, friendship is your spirit’s guard and everyone should treasure it．
1.How many qualities of making friends are mentioned in the passage?
A．Six B．Three． C．Five D Seven．
2.To make a friend，should be the first quality．
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A．tolerance |
B．1ove |
C．patience |
D．understanding |
3.Which of the following is true according to the passage?
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A．Friends often have the same character. |
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B．Friends can help us overcome loneliness and depression· |
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C．There shouldn’t be conflict between friends- |
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D．Friends can make us patient and believable． |
4.What is the main idea of the passage?
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A．The meaning of a true friendship． |
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B．The happiness of having a good friend． |
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C．Special qualities to make friends． |
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D．The importance of friendship． |
SPECIAL EVENTS THIS WEEKEND
Captain Good Fellow
Do you enjoy interesting stories ,funny games and exciting dances? Captain Good Fellow will be ready to teach all these things to children of all ages at the City Theatre on Saturday morning at，10：00，free．
Walking Tour of the Town
Forget your worries on Saturday morning．Take a beautiful walk and learn about the local history．Meet at the front entrance of City Hall at 9：30．Wear comfortable shoes!
Films at the Museum
Two European films will be shown Saturday afternoon at the Museum Theatre．See Broken Window at 1：30．The Workers will be at 3：45. For further information，call 4987898．
International Picnic
Are you tired of eating the same food every day? Come to Central Park on Saturday and enjoy food from all over the world．Delicious and inexpensive．From noon to 5：00 P．m．
Take me out to the Ballgame
It’s October，and tonight is the last chance to see the Redbirds his year．Get your tickets at the gate．It might be cold…．Don’t forget sweaters and jackets．
Do you want to hear “the Zoo”？
“The Zoo”，the popular rock group from Australia，will give their first U．S．concert tomorrow night at 8 at Rose Hall，City College．
1.You can probably eat Chinese，Italian，and Arabian food at ．
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A．Central Park on Saturday |
B．the ballgame outside |
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C．5：00 in the afternoon |
D．the front entrance of City Hall |
2.You can see movies at．
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A．the Citv College |
B．the Central Park |
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C．the City Theatre |
D．the Museum Theatre |
3.If you are going on the Walking Tour，don’t forget·
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A．your worries |
B．your comfortable shoes |
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C．your beautiful walk |
D．your learning about local history |
4.“The Zoo ”is．
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A．a park with lots of animals |
B．the first concert from the U．S． |
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C．a music group from Australia |
D．a popular rock band from Europe |
Born into a poor family，two of the Durers' children still had a dream for art，but they knew their father could not afford to send either of them to the academy(院校)．
After discussions，the two boys finally agreed to toss a coin．The loser would go to the nearby mines and support his brother while he attended the academy．Then，when the winner completed his studies，he would support the other brother，either with sales of his art work or，if necessary，by working in the mines．So they tossed a coin．Albrecht Durer won the toss and went to Nuremberg．Albert went to the dangerous mines and financed his brother，whose work at the academy was almost an immediate success，and by graduation，he was beginning to earn considerable fees for his works．
When the Durer family held a dinner to celebrate Albrecht's homecoming， Albrecht drank a toast to his brother，“Now，Albert，it is your turn to go to Nuremberg and follow your dream，and I will take care of you．”
Albert wiped the tears from his cheeks，glanced at the faces he loved，and said softly，“No，brother．It is too late for me．Look….look what four years in the mines have done to my hands! The bones in every finger have been broken at least once，and lately I have been suffering from arthritis(关节炎)so badly in my right hand that I cannot even hold a glass to return your toast，much 1ess make lines on canvas(画布)with a pen or a brush．No，brother …for me it is too 1ate．”
Therefore，Albrecht took pains to draw his brother’s injured hands with palms together and thin fingers stretched skyward．The entire world almost immediately opened their hearts to his great masterpiece and named it “The Praying Hands”．
1.The passage is mainly about
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A．the early life of Albrecht Durer |
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B．the story behind “The Praying Hands” |
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C．the sacrifice Albrecht made for his brother |
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D．a young man showing his talent through effort |
2.According to the two brothers’ agreement，．
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A．they let the coin decide who would go to the academy first |
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B．the winner would work at the academy in exchange for the loser’s help |
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C．the loser would go to the mines and earn money to pay for his own education |
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D．the winner would work in the mines after graduation in return for the loser's support |
3.Albert refused his brother’s offer because．
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A．he was too old to learn drawing |
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B．he suffered an accident. |
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C．he was not used to holding a pen or brush |
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D．his hands were out of shape as a result of hard work |
4.The artist created the masterpiece “The Praying Hands”
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A．to show kindness to his poor brother |
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B．to encourage people to realize their dreams |
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C．in praise of his brother’s sacrifice and love |
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D．in honor of his brother as a symbol of working people |
