假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I was born in a farmer’s family in Suizhong County, Liaoning Province in June, in 1965．When I was a child, I dreamed flying in the sky．I joined the army in June, 1983．In 1992, I was sent to the air force base．In August, 1996, I become one of the first 14 members from 1,500 pilot through the physical examination．I worked hardly, so I was among the first astronauts of our country in 1998．I was choosed as one of the first man space aircraft astronauts later．In Oct．15, 2003, I successful flew to space, circled around the earth about 14 circles and then returned．I was honored to have given the chance to be the first Chinese to travel in space．
根据汉语提示，写出单词或者短语的正确形式完成下面的句子。
1.My son is ____________ about collecting car models. (对…热心)
2.The book gave us a vivid of the war. (描述)
3.It was a surprisingly dry day after the rain of the week. (先前的)
4.I deeply ____________ your kindness in coming so far to meet me. (感激)
5.During our conversation, I realized he was trying to ____________ the topic. (躲避)
6.She looked up his telephone number in the phone book to _________________ that she had got it right. (确定)
7.Jack breaks the ice during the conversation by _________________ sometimes. (讲笑话)
8.You are ________________ and you will succeed in the end if you keep moving like this. (取得进步)
9.“The interests shall ___________________ five parts, according to the agreement made by both sides,” declared the judge. (划分)
10.There is only ten minutes to go. We can’t wait any more, ___________________, we should start at once. (换言之)
The Internet has opened up a whole new on-line world for us to meet, chat and go where we've never been before. But just as in face-to-face communication, there are some basic rules of behavior that should be followed when online. 66 Imagine how you'd feel if you were in the other person’s shoes.
For anything you’re about to send: ask yourself, “Would I say this to the person’s face?” If the answer is no, rewrite and reread. 67 If someone in the chat room is rude to you, your instinct is to fire back in the same manner. But try not to do so. 68 If it was caused by a disagreement with another member, try to fix the situation by politely discussing it. Remember to respect the beliefs and opinions of others in the chat room.
69 Offer advice when asked by newcomers, as they may not be sure what to do or how to communicate. When someone makes a mistake whether it’s a stupid question or an unnecessarily long answer be kind about it. If it’s a small mistake, you may not need to say anything. Even if you feel strongly about it, think twice before saying anything. Having good manners yourself doesn’t give you license to correct everyone else. 70 At the same time, if you find you are wrong, be sure to correct yourself and apologize to those that you have offended. It is not polite to ask others personal questions such as their age, sex, and marital status. Unless you know the person very well, and you are both comfortable with sharing personal information, don’t ask such questions.
A. It’s natural that there are some people who speak rudely or make mistakes online.
B. Repeat the process till you feel sure that you’d feel comfortable saying the words to the person’s face.
C. Everyone was new to the network once.
D. The basic rule is simple: treat others in the same way you would want to be treated.
E. When you send short messages to a person on line, you must say something beautiful to hear.
F. You should either ignore the person, or use your chat software to block their messages.
G. If you do decide to tell someone about a mistake, point it out politely.
Hearing the dog barking fiercely, away _____.
A. fleeing the thief B. was fleeing the thief
C. the thief was fleeing D. fled the thief
It is immediately clear ____ the financial crisis will soon be over.
A. since B. what C. when D. whether
During the period of recent terrorist activities, people _____ not to touch and unattended bag.
A. had always been warned B. were always being warned
C. are always warning D. always warned
