Question

该文中共有十处错误,每句中最多有两处,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ＼）划掉。

修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2、只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

A discussion about hiking has held in our class. Some students think that hiking during vacations can make people to feel healthier, fresher and more harmonious with nature. They find themselves deep attracted by the beauty of nature. They can also be relaxing while they are walking in deep mountains. But nowadays some hikers even begin to explore the places that people has never been to, and accidents have been happened now and then because poor knowledge of hiking. Some hikers even lost their life. The other students in our class think it not safe to organize so dangerous activities. They make suggestions which laws should be passed and hikers should be trained before they attend the activities.

Answer

 held前加been

 删去to

 deep—deeply

 relaxing—relaxed

 has—have

 删去been

 because后加of

 life—lives

 so—such

 which—that

【解析】

试题分析：

 本句话是指讨论被举行，应该使用被动语态的形式。

 固定词组make sb do sth让某人做某事

 用副词deeply修饰动词attract

 对指人的主语进行说明使用过去分词转换的形容词relaxed。

 主语是people，谓语动词用复数形式。

 happen没有被动语态。故这里不应该有been。

 后面是名词poor knowledge of hiking.，故使用because of。

 前面是形容词their故后面使用复数形式lives.

 后面是名词短语dangerous activities,故使用such。而不是so，so后面接形容词或者副词。

 that引导同位语从句解释名词suggestion的内容。That在句中不充当任何成分，只起连接作用。

考点：考查短文纠错