Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

One afternoon, Charlie Chaplin was sitting together with his friends and

talking while a fly flew into a room and kept flying around Chaplin’s head.

Chaplin waved her hands and drove it away, but the fly soon came back again.

For a second the fly even rested on his noses! Chaplin has got angry, but

he took up something and wanted to hit it. However, the fly ran away on time.

After flying in the room for a few seconds, the fly final rested on the table

in front Chaplin. This time Chaplin thought he could surely kill it. After

he looked at it carefully, Chaplin gives up, saying, “It isn’t the same

fly.”

Answer

 while改成 when

 a 改成the

 her改成 his

 noses 改成nose

 去掉has

 but 改成so

 on 改成in

 final 改成Finally

 去掉of

 gives 改成gave

【解析】

试题分析：

 while不能与短暂性动词连用，而when可以

 特指他们所在的房间

 Chaplin是男性

 人只有一个鼻子

 只使用过去谁即可

 上下文是因果关系

 in time及时

 用副词做状语修饰动词

 固定词组in front of在…前面

 本文使用过去时

考点：考查短文纠错