Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（︿)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线〔\〕划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Li Ming went to the park in last Saturday afternoon after he had already finished his homeworks. He saw several boys skating in the pond happily. Suddenly he heard a cry for help. Looked ahead, he found one of the boys had fallen into the water. Li Ming jumped into icy water immediately and tried to pull the boy to safety. Then the boy was given first aid but soon came to myself. The boy’s parents came soon after they received the phone call. They were very much thankful Li Ming, who was trembling there with cold.

Answer

 在第一行中将in 删去，

 在第一行中把homeworks 改为homework,，

 在第二行中将in 改为on ,

 在第二行中将looked 改为looking

 在第三行中在icy前加the， ,

 在第三行中将tried改为managed，

 在第四行中将but 改为and，

 在第四行中将myself 改为himself，

 在第五行中将将much删去，

 在第五行中在thankful 后加to，

【解析】

试题分析：

 ，时间前有last/next this/that every等词，不加介词,故删去in ,

 homework为不可数名词，故将homeworks 改为homework,

 on the pond 意为在湖边，故将in 改为on ,

 looked 在此处为非谓语动词，其逻辑主语为he,表主动，故将looked 改为looking,

 特指湖中的冰水，故加the ,

 从下文知救出了那个男孩，故将tried 改为manged,try to do意思是为尽力去做某事，没有结果 ,manage to do 意设法做成了某事，

 given first aid 和 come to myself 之间没有转折关系，故将but改为and,

 那个男孩苏醒过来，不是我，故将myself改为himself,反身代词一般与句子主语保持一致。

 very much 一般修饰动词，very 可修饰形容词，故将much删去,

 be thankful to 为固定搭配，意为“感谢某人”，故后加to.

考点：考查学生对基本词汇、语法项目的掌握情况