Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:

每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

My brother Tom was very selfish when he was a little boy. He did not want share things with other people. For example，when he bought a chocolate cake, he put them in a secret place where I couldn’t find. Then he ate it all by himself. He never helped other. He said he is busy. That is, a game of tennis making him very busy. He did not care if something he did made people angrily. For instance, on one night he played strong and loudly music till four o’clock in the morning. But he is difference now. He often helps grandma with housework, helps mum with cooking and helps his classmates with their lessons.

Answer

  want后加to

  them→ it

 where→ which/that或去掉where。

 other → others

 busy前的is→ was

 making→ made。

 angrily→angry

 去掉on

 loudly→ loud

 difference→ different。

【解析】

试题分析：

 固定搭配，want to do sth 想做某事。

 put的宾语是a chocolate cake所以应用代词it。

 定语从句，关系词在从句中做find的宾语所以用关系代词which/that,作宾语时关系代词还可省略。

 这里other指其他人，不是指一个人所以应用复数。

 said是过去式，它的从句中的谓语动词应是过去式，所以用was.

 这里应该是谓语动词，因为叙述的是过去的事情所以用made。

 angry修饰的是名词people所以用形容词而不用副词。

 在表示在特定的日子前用介词on，one night不是指特定的那一天，所以此处不用on。

 此处strong和loud修饰名词music所以用形容词不用副词。

 different形容词做is的表语，意思是他现在不同了。

考点：短文纠错。