Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I like music very much, pop songs particularly. Every evening then I am doing homework and at weekends when I at home, I always play some of my favorite songs on my tape recorder. The familiar patterns of notes attract me into the colourfully world of music. Now and then I stopped to follow the songs. Sometimes, my mother comes in, asked me to fix my attention to my homework. She does not like the pop music. Like most grown-ups, she enjoys folk songs, because the peaceful music reminds her of their beautiful life when she was young. It is a truth which people of different age understand music differently and enjoy different kinds of music.

Answer

 then →when

 I∧ at→am

 colourfully→colourful/colorful

 stopped→stop

 asked→asking

 to→on

 does not like the →去掉the

 their→her

 which→that

 age→ages

【解析】

试题分析：本文叙述作者平时喜欢听磁带，听自己喜欢的歌，有时还跟着带子自己唱，作者的母亲不喜欢流行音乐，她喜欢民歌，听民歌使她回忆起以前的美好生活。

 考查连词。when引导的是和后一个when引导的从句是并列的。

 考查动词。这里缺少系动词故用am.

 考查形容词。colourfully是副词；colourful/colorful是形容词，修饰名词。

 考查动词。因为本文说的是平常做的事，故用一般现在时stop.

 考查非谓语动词词。这个句子没有连词，并且应有谓语动词，故用非谓语动词，my mother 与ask之间是主动关系，故用asking.

 考查固定短语。fix one’s attention on是固定短语。

 考查冠词。pop music是泛指，故去掉the.

 考查代词。her指的是母亲的，这是上下文的人称代词的一致性。

 考查主语从句。It是形式主语， that引导是真正的主语从句，that在从句中不做成分。

 考查名词。因为有different 修饰，故用复数ages.

考点：短文改错。