Question

第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面加上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

This morning I went to a nearby food store to buy some breads. After the man in the store packing the bread in a small bag for me, I began to walk home with bag in my hand. On the way I met my next-door neighbor, Miss Wang, that was walking her dog .We greeted with each other and begin to talk about the weather. As we were talking, his dog came up at the bag in my hand though the bread gave off a delicious smell. As a result, some of the bread fell to the ground or the dog began to enjoy it. Five minutes late, I was back at the store to buy bread again.

Answer

 breads→bread

 packing→packed

 with 后加 the

 that→who

 with去掉

 begin→began

 his→her

 though→because/ as / for/since

 or→and

 late→later

【解析】

试题分析：本文叙述了作者在买了面包回家的路上，结果在回家的路上碰见了邻居在遛狗，他们谈论了一会儿，这时狗闻到了面包的味道，结果最后把面包给吃掉了，作者没有办法，又去商店买了一些面包。

 I went to a nearby food store to buy some breads.中 bread是不可数名词，没有复数形式，所以把breads改为bread。

 After the man in the store packing the bread 。句中缺少谓语动词，而且文章叙述过去的事情，所以把packing改为过去式packed 。

 I began to walk home with bag in my hand. 其中 bag 为可数名词，并且是指前面提到过的bag，所以 with 后加定冠词the表示特指。

 Miss Wang, that was walking her dog . Miss Wang 后应该是非限制性定语从句，that不引导非限制性定语从句，所以把that改为who。

 We greeted with each other .  greet是及物动词，后面直接跟宾语，所以去掉with。

 We greeted with each other and begin to talk about the weather.句中begin 和greeted 是并列谓语，全文用过去时，所以begin改为过去式began。

 his dog came up at the bag文中是指Miss Wang 在遛狗，人称指代错误，所以 把his改为her。

 though the bread gave off a delicious smell句中指面包发出的味道引的狗窜上来，是因果关系，所以though改为because/ as / for/since。

 or the dog began to enjoy it 面包掉在地上和狗开始吃应该是顺承关系，所以or改为and。

 Five minutes late固定短语“多久后”应该用时间段+later，所以 late改为later。

考点：短文改错。