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高三学生李梅就如何提高自己的英语写作水平写信向外籍教师Mary请教。请你代替Mary写封回信。

写作要点:

1、对英语写作的认识;

2、至少提出三点建议;

3、举例说明英语写作水平是怎样提高的。

注意:

1、词数120左右;

2、开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。

Dear Li Mei,

    Your letter reached me this morning. Now I’d like to share my opinion with you.

                                                                           

                                                                              

                                                                               

Sincerely hoping you can benefit from the above and will make great progress in your writing.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Mary

 

【解析】 试题分析:本篇书面表达是考查书信体裁的作文。内容是就如何提高学生的英语写作水平提出自己的看法和建议。学生对这种写作体裁和内容都非常熟悉,只是在写作时要注意审题,要求是代替Mary回信,所以语气口吻要正确。在讲述自己对写作的认识和提出建议时可以使用一般现在时态。此外还要注意使用适当的连接词,以使文章脉络清晰、内容连贯,从而提高作文的档次。 【亮点说明】本篇范文语言流畅,要点全面。尤其是firstly,secondly和besides等表顺序的词以及for one thing, 和for another thing等短语的使用不仅把要点连贯起来,而且使文章脉络分明,条理清晰,结构更加紧凑。文中的谚语As the saying goes : practice makes perfect. 以及 the more you write , the more you will get 句式的出现更是给文章锦上添花。总之,这是一篇值得借鉴的优秀范文。 考点:考查提纲作文。
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