Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下写出该加的词。

删除: 把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。

There are different train ticket for people to choose from when traveled by train. They may want to buy a single ticket and a return ticket. A single ticket allows us to enjoy more freedom at their destinations while a return not only is cheaper but also saves them trouble of buying the ticket when they have decided to return. Some people prefer hard seats to soft ones. Young people like to have hard seats because enjoying the company of other passengers is exactly when they need during a journey. Businessmen would not like to have soft seats. They wanted to have a good rest. When they get on the train，they are still energetic and can rapid go on to do their jobs.

Answer

 ticket改为tickets

 traveled改为traveling

 and改为or

 us 改为 them

 them 后加 the

 when改为what

 would后删掉not

 want改为wanted

 on改为off

 rapid 改为rapidly

【解析】

试题分析：在购买火车票时，不同的人可以选择不同的火车票。如果想省事省钱的话，可以选择往返票；如果想能够在目的地多些自由时间的话，可以选择单程票；如果年轻人想在旅途中多个伴的话，可以购买硬座票；而经商的人可以买软座票，这样旅途结束时会仍然精力充沛，能够马上投入到工作中去。

 考查名词单复数。There are different train ticket在there be 句型中 be动词和后面的名词在数上保持一致，而且由下文可知此处是指多种不同的票，所以ticket应该用复数形式，把ticket改为tickets。

 考查非谓语动词。when traveled by train.从结构判断此处是连词+分词，而动词travel和其逻辑主语people之间应该是主动关系，所以把traveled改为traveling。

 考查连词用法。They may want to buy a single ticket and a return ticket.从下文可知他们是想买单程票或者往返票，是一种选择关系，所以把and改为or。

 考查代词用法。A single ticket allows us to enjoy more freedom从上下文可知此处是指游客们，而且上文They may want to buy也提示了此处代词的指代错误，所以把us改为they。

 考查冠词用法。but also saves them trouble of buying the ticket根据上下文可知此处指省掉了人们再次买票的麻烦，trouble是特指，所以them后加the。

 考查表语从句。is exactly when they need during a journey从结构可知表语从句中need是及物动词，而when是连接副词不可以做宾语，所以把when改为what。

 考查对上下文的理解。Businessmen would not like to have soft seats.下文讲他们想到了目的地时，仍然能精力充沛并且能马上投入到他们的工作中去，由此可知商人们喜欢做软座，所以把not去掉。

 考查动词时态。They wanted to have a good rest.整篇文章都是叙述不同的人对于座位的不同选择，是讲述一种事实，而且全文也都使用的是一般现在时，所以把wanted改为want。

 考查短语搭配。When they get on the train，从上下文可知此处是指下车后，turn on“上车”；而turn off“下车”，所以把on改为off。

 考查副词用法。and can rapid go on to do their jobs. Rapid是形容词“迅速的”，用来做定语或表语，而此处是修饰动词go on ，所以把rapid改为副词rapidly。

考点：考查短文改错。