Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处，每处仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

    2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon .We didn’t need to do so many homework .Therefore , we have more time with after-school activities .For example , we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day .

My dream school look like a big garden .There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings .We can lie on the grass for a rest , or sat by the lake listening music .The teachers here are kind and helpfully .They are not only our teachers but also our friends .

Answer

1.They→There

2.didn’t→don’t

3.many →much

4.with→for

5.hour→hours

6.look→looks

7.去掉the

8.sat→sit

9.listening 后加to

10.helpfully →helpful

【解析】

试题分析：在本段中作者描述了自己理想学校的样子。他理想的学校是上午8点半上课，下午3点半放学，一天只需要上5节课。学校里没有很多的作业，因此可以参加很多课后的活动。此外，学校还要像一个大花园，学生可以躺草坪上休息，可以听音乐等。

1.They→There 考查固定句型。They are three lessons in the morning。根据句意可知此处表达：上午有三节课，表示“有”，应该是there be 句型，故把They改为There。

2.didn’t→don’t考查动词时态。We didn’t need to do so many homework。此处叙述每天要做的事情，应该用一般现在时，把didn’t改为don’t。

3.many →much 考查不定代词。We didn’t need to do so many homework.。many修饰复数名词，如果修饰不可数名词homework应该用much。

4.with→for考查介词用法。we have more time with after-school activities。 短语表达：.have time for sth 或者to do sth意思是“ 有做某事的时间”，把with改为for。

5.hour→hours 考查名词单复数。we can do reading for one and a half hour。此处one and a half hour意思是“一个半小时”，hour应该用复数形式。

6.look→looks考查主谓一致。My dream school look like a big garden 。主语是单数名词school，根据主谓一致的原则可知把look改为第三人称单数looks。

7.去掉the考查冠词用法。There are all kinds of the flowers。解题关键：掌握there be 句型的特点，即在there be 句型中名词均是泛指概念，所以应该把the 去掉。

8.sat→sit考查动词时态。or sat by the lake listening music。根据前句内容We can lie on the grass for a rest判断此处是or连接的另一个谓语动词，和lie并列，所以把sat改为sit。

9.listening 后加to。考查固定短语。or sat by the lake listening music。Listen是不及物动词，后面不能跟宾语，固定短语listen to 意思是“听”，所以在listening后加to。

10.helpfully →helpful考查形容词和副词。The teachers here are kind and helpfully .涉及知识：系动词后要跟形容词做表语，所以把helpfully改为helpful。

考点：考查短文改错。