Question

你叫林涛，是一名中学生，你对部分同学迷于玩电子游戏(video games)的现象很着急，便向一家英文报社编辑部寄了一封信，阐述了玩电子游戏的坏处。

要点如下：

1．电子游戏在学生中很流行，有些学生整天玩电子游戏，忘了做作业，甚至逃学（play truant）。

2．玩电子游戏要花很多钱，有的经常向父母要钱，有的经常向同学借钱，有的甚至偷同学的钱。

3．过分玩电子游戏使店主受益，对同学的学习和健康不利。

4．希望政府采取措施加以制止。

注意：1．词数120左右 2．全文包括以上内容，但不要逐字翻译 3．信的开头已给出。

Dear editor,

Now video games are very popular among the school students. _____________________

Answer

Dear editor,

Now video games are very popular among the school students. Some students are so interested in the game that they spend all day playing. Sometimes they forget to do their homework and some even play truant. Each time they have to pay much money. In order to play video games they often ask their parents for more money, some often borrow money from other students, some even steal money from their classmates, which have brought out every bad effects.

Too much video game playing needs time, money and energy. The owners benefit a lot but it’s not good for the students’ study and health.

I do hope measures will be taken by the government to prevent students from playing video games.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文。你叫林涛，是一名中学生，你对部分同学迷于玩电子游戏(video games)的现象很着急，便向一家英文报社编辑部寄了一封信，阐述了玩电子游戏的坏处。要点如下：1．电子游戏在学生中很流行，有些学生整天玩电子游戏，忘了做作业，甚至逃学（play truant）。2．玩电子游戏要花很多钱，有的经常向父母要钱，有的经常向同学借钱，有的甚至偷同学的钱。3．过分玩电子游戏使店主受益，对同学的学习和健康不利。4．希望政府采取措施加以制止。需要写的内容已经粗略给出，需要我们翻译成完整通顺的句子，适当添加些内容，使文章更充实。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。一定要给出自己的看法。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色。注意要求的词数120词左右，不要太多也不要太少。

【亮点说明】In order to play video games they often ask their parents for more money, some often borrow money from other students, some even steal money from their classmates, which have brought out every bad effects. 这里含有一个非限制性定语从句。

考点：提纲类书面表达