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假如你是红星中学高二(1)班李华,下面四幅图描述了近期你看到骑公共自行车“绿色出...

假如你是红星中学高二(1)班李华,下面四幅图描述了近期你看到骑公共自行车“绿色出行”

的宣传后所采取的行动。请根据图片的先后顺序,为校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文。

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One possible version: Being driven by my father to school one day, I suddenly noticed many public bicycles parked along the road in my neighborhood. Behind them on the wall was a sign reading “Green Travel”. Feeling it my duty to do something, I told my father that I would give up his car and rent a bike instead. Back home that day, I searched the Internet for information about how and where to rent a bike. I found out that there was a rental service nearby, where I could apply for a rental card. The next day I headed toward it immediately after school. To be honest, I was a bit surprised to find quite a few people lining up there for the cards. I joined them and finally got one. The next day I first rode a bike to the subway station and then took the subway to school. The bicycle seat is not as comfortable as a car seat, but I feel proud that I am doing something for the environment. 【解析】 试题分析:根据提示可知本文为图画式作文,命题者要求学生根据图片内容写一篇短文。因为出题者没有提出具体的写作话题,所以需要学生自己观察图片提炼出主要话题进行写作。分析图片可知它主要讲为保护环境,一个青少年积极参与“绿色出行”活动的故事。此类作文的结构往往采用三段式,第一段简要讲述故事发生的时间,地点及人物。第二段是故事的主要部分。第三段是故事的结尾部分,然后用一到两句话说明自己的感受,结束全文,升华主题。在在行文构思中,注意过渡词和各种句型的搭配使用,确保文章层次清晰,结构严谨。 【亮点说明】 本范文结构清晰,最大的特色是灵活使用各种句型结构。例如现在分词作状语Being driven by my father to school one day及Feeling it my duty to do something,过去分词作后置定语many public bicycles parked along the road in my neighborhood,完全倒装句Behind them on the wall was a sign reading “Green Travel”. Where引导的非限制性定语从句where I could apply for a rental card.等等。 其次是文章中使用Back home that day和The next day等短语表明故事按照时间顺序发展,向阅卷老师展示了清晰的结构。最后是文章中一些过渡短语和固定结构选用的非常好,如give up his car,To be honest,as comfortable as a car seat和feel proud that等。第二段中的I was a bit surprised to find quite a few people lining up there for the cards中使用了“主语+be+adj.+to do sth.”的句型,并且包含了一个现在分词做后置定语的成分,充分展现了作者深厚的作文功底,无可争议地提高了文章的档次。  
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