Question

假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一篇作文。文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不记分。

Dear editor,

Some years ago, my hometown was used to be a beautiful place. Thick trees and grass can be seen all over the hills. As time going by, people destroyed almost the whole forest grow more crops. To make matters worse, people let their cattles eat up the grass. So you can only see wasteland instead green forests now. As a result of, when it rains, the soil is washed down the hills and into the rivers. Strongly winds also blow away the valuable soil lie on the top of the fields.

I do hope all the people will take good care of the forests but plant more trees to improve our living conditions.

Answer

1.去掉was

2.can改为: could

3.As改为:With/或going改为：went/goes

4.grow前加to

5.cattles改为: cattle

6.instead后加of

7.去掉of

8.strongly改为: strong

9.lie 改为:lying

10.but 改为: and

【解析】

试题分析：

1. to do sth是固定用法，意思是过去常常做某事。

2.

3.随着时间的流逝，应该说As time went/goes by,。

4.

5.表示“牲畜”(在美国英语只指牛类)，是一个表示复数意义的集体名词(但不能有复数词尾-s)。

6. of后接成分，这里是一个成分，所以用instead of。

7. a result表结果，所以去掉of。

8. 。

9.

10.句意：我确实希望所有的人们要照看好森林并且多植树来改善我们的生活状况。所以but 改为: and。

考点：考查短文改错