Question

假如你是李华，最近你从报纸上看到一家涉外酒店招聘暑期兼职工的广告，请你根据下列要点提示写一封应聘信。

1.李华，女，18岁，身体健康。

2.擅长英语，口语流利。

3.性格外向，交际能力强。

注意：

1.词数120左右。

2.书信格式已经给出，不计入总词数。

3.可以适当拓展。

Dear Sir or Madame,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer

Dear Sir or Madame,

I am writing in response to your advertisement in the newspaper. My name is Li Hua and I am 18 years old. I think I will be fit for the job as a waitress in your hotel this summer vacation. My advantages are as follows:

Firstly, I am healthy and strong. I can work for long hours in summer. Secondly, my English is excellent. I can speak English fluently and have no difficulty communicating with foreigners. Finally , I am outgoing and good at communicating with others. As a result, I am popular among my classmates and teachers.

I would appreciate it if you could give me the chance to work in your hotel. I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

【解析】

试题分析：要求考生给一家招聘暑期兼职工的涉外酒店写应聘信。要符合提示所给要求，保证字数在120左右。

亮点分析：文中运用了较好的从句和复合句，如开头用复合句介绍自己“My name is Li Hua and I am 18 years old…”简单却能使内容清晰，条件状语从句“I would appreciate it if you could give me the chance to work in your hotel.”等；文中多处运用到好的固定短语，如“in response to…”“be fit for…”“have no difficulty in doing sth”“be good at doing sth”等；第二部分根据提示介绍优点，较好的运用了连接词“Firstly…Secondly…Finally…”，使文章逻辑层次分明，条理清晰；最后有适当的扩展，并且结尾有礼有节，是一篇较好的考场作文。

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