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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)。并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Sometime in February, my teacher told us about the city speech contest, its topic was “People who have overcome difficulties in their lives”. I thought of my grandma would be my perfect topic. Then I carefully prepared for contest. A couple of weeks later, after the first round I was choosing to be one of the seven finalists! The final was held soon. I was the sixth to presenting the speech. How a relief when I finished it! After the last person finished, the judge made their final decisions and announced that I have won first prize. The audience were going wildly clapping and cheering! I was extremely happy. It was such exciting a moment that I will always remember it.

 

1.its前加and 或把its改为whose或者删掉topic后的was 2.thought 后删of 3.for 后加the 4.choosing →chosen 5.presenting→ present 6.How→ What 7.judge →judges 8.have →had 9.wildly→ wild 10.such →so 【解析】 试题分析:我参加了一次全市英语口语比赛。之前经过认真的准备,和赛场上的出色发挥,我获得了第一名。感到非常高兴。这是一次难忘的经历。 1.1】在its前加and 或把its改为whose或者删掉topic后的was。前后句子没有联系。通过变化,可以在its前加and使前后构成并列句,也可以把its改为whose吧后一句改成定语从句,或者删掉topic后的was变成独立主格结构。 2.2】thought 后是宾语从句,所以去掉of 。think of 意为:认为......怎样。 3.3】第二次提到contest ,所以for 后加the表特指。 4.4】was 后的choosing 变成chosen,使句子成为被动语态,符合主谓的被动关系。 5.5】the sixth 是序数词,后面用动词不定式做定语所以把to presenting改为to present。 6.6】a relief 是名词,How修饰形容词或副词,而What则修饰名词,所以把How改成What。 7.7】根据后面的their final decisions可知,裁判不止一人,所以把 judge 改成复数形式judges。 8.8】announced 是动词的过去式,所以把have 改成had,构成过去完成时。使时态前后一致。 9.9】go wild 是系表结构,所以把副词wildly改成形容词wild做表语。 10.10】so exciting a moment 相当于such an exciting moment.所以把 such 改成so。 考点:短文改错。
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16.A. sad          B.  hard             C.  ordinary         D. shy

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20.A. starting    B.  seeing            C.  taking          D. turning

 

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"Previous research has shown that paying people more than they expect may elicit reciprocity(相互作用) in the form of greater productivity," notes Deepak Malhotra, a Harvard business-administration professor who worked on the study. What he and his colleagues found, however, was that the connection between more pay and extra effort depends on presenting the increase "as a gift—that is, as something you've chosen to do purely as a nice gesture, with no strings attached."

Malhotra and his team studied 267 people hired by oDesk, a global online network of freelancers, to do a one-time data-entry project for four hours. All of the new hires were people in developing countries, for whom hourly wages of $3 and $4 were higher than what they had been making in previous jobs.

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D. Because they felt they were nicely treated and tried best to repay it.

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D. Actions speak louder than words.

 

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