Question

你校学生会需招聘一名留学生做英语学习顾问，请你以短文形式写一则招聘启事。内容主要包括：

——母语是英语，汉语流利者优先 ——解答英语学习问题，协助组织英语活动

——每周4小时。报酬面议  ——联系人：李华（Tel. [phone]）

English Advisor Wanted

Students Union

Yucai High School

Answer

English Advisor Wanted

The Student Union of our school decides to invite an international student to work as an English Study Advisor next term. The main responsibilities of the advisor include helping students to practice their oral English, answering their questions, and helping organize activities such as singing English songs, English evenings, or lectures on interesting topics

The applicant should be a native speaker of English. Fluency in Chinese is preferred. The advisor is expected to work 4 hours per week

If you are interested, please call Li Hua at 13011223344 for an interview. Payment for the service will be discussed during the interview.

Student Union

Yucai High School

【解析】

试题分析：题目要求校学生会需招聘一名留学生做英语学习顾问，以短文形式写一则招聘启事。内容主要包括：

母语是英语，汉语流利者优先；解答英语学习问题，协助组织英语活动；每周4小时。报酬面议；联系人：李华（Tel. [phone]）。不能出现真实姓名，注意时态的正确使用；不要出现标点和拼写错误，尽量保持卷面整洁、字体美观；注意行文的连贯性。

文章分三段，第一段点名校“学生会需招聘一名留学生做英语学习顾问”的要点，用了and、or等连接词使行文更加流畅。第二段是对招聘启事中应聘学习顾问者的要求。第三段是招聘者的联系方式。

全文立意好，贴近实际，可行性强。从语法来看，没犯语法错误；从结构来看，用了and、or等连接词使行文更加流畅；从文采上看，文章多处用了从句，用到了被动语态等。整篇文章简洁、让人读起朗朗上口，是一篇很值得借鉴的文章。

亮点说明：

范文使用了一些重要的语法知识：动名词并列结构include helping students to practice their oral English, answering their questions, and helping organize activities；一般现在时被动语态The advisor is expected to work；祈使句If you are interested, please call；一般将来时被动语态Payment for the service will be discussed。语法知识使用得当，叙述清晰明了。不定式作目的状语to work as an English Study Advisor next term.

范文注意使用了一般现在时的正确使用，并让全文时态保持一致，对时态有较好的把握。

范文注意使用复合句The Student Union of our school decides to invite an international student to work as an English Study Advisor next term.使文章内容更加丰富，却不失调理性。

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