Question

短文改错 （共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分）

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分

1.I’m a middle school student name Li Ming. I’m writing to tell you something. Recently I noticed many of my classmates often go to the cyber cafe near our school.

2.I went there too in the other day.

3.I was surprising to see many students playing computer games,

4.watching films or chat. Some students were even talking about love affairs online.

5.On my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place

6.which we can find much

7.useful informations.

8.The Internet should be a window to the outside world rather than place for games.

9.The Internet is good if we make good use of it. Otherwise, it will give us great harm.

10.So the local government should take measure to make sure that students use cyber cafes positively.

Answer

1.name-named

2.去掉in

3.surprising ---surprised

4.chat---chatting

5.On---In

6.which---where

7.informations---information

8.place前加a

9.give—do

10.measure—measures

【解析】

试题分析：在本文中作者讲述了自己对网络的看法，他发现很多同学都去网吧玩游戏，聊天，甚至谈恋爱。而在他看来，网络应该被好好利用去查找信息，去做有用的事情，而不是做些无聊的事情。

1. 考查非谓语动词。I’m a middle school student name Li Ming. 此处name意思是“命名”，应该是非谓语做后置定语，和被修饰名词student之间是被动关系，用过去分词，把name改为named。

2.去掉in 考查介词。I went there too in the other day。固定短语：the other day“几天前”，前面不用介词，故去掉in。

3.surprising ---surprised 考查形容词。I was surprising to see many students playing computer games, watching films or chat 。surprising“令人吃惊的”，surprised“感到吃惊的”，此处指人的状况，故把surprising改为surprised。

4.chatting 考查非谓语动词。I was surprising to see many students playing computer games, watching films or chat。此处是see sb doing sth 结构，故把chat改为chatting。

5.On---In 考查介词。On my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place。固定短语：In one’s opinion “在某人看来”，把On改为In。

6.】which---where…考查定语从句。cafes should be a place which we can find much useful informations. Place后面的定语从句主谓宾成分完整，意思通顺，故判断填关系副词，而先行词是表地点的place，故把which改为where。

7.informations---information考查名词。…cafes should be place which we can find much useful informations. Information是不可数名词，没有复数形式，改为information。

8.place前加a 考查冠词词。cafes should be place…….place是可数名词，此处表示泛指，所以前面加a。

9.—do 考查动词短语。a place will give us great harm.。固定短语：do sb harm “对某人有害”，把give改为do。

10.measure—measures 考查名词。government should take measure to make sure that students use cyber cafes positively. 固定短语：take measures to do “采取措施做某事”，把measure改为measures。

考点：考查短文改错