Question

高中生在成长的过程中会碰到一些烦恼。你班就这一话题正积极筹备召开一次主题班会。请你依据下表进行必要的思考，并用英语准备一篇发言稿。

pains	solutions
相貌、体形不美	不必在意
不被他人理解，朋友少	加强沟通
学习滞后，压力大	？
零花钱不多	？

注意：1、词数100左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

2、参考词汇：相貌：looks  体形：figures  压力：stress

Good morning, boys and girls,

We high school students do have some growing pains, but we can get rid of them correctly and wisely.

That’s all. Thank you.

Answer

One possible version：

Good morning, boys and girls,

We high school students do have some growing pains, but we can get rid of them correctly and wisely.

First, some of us are upset about our figures and looks. It’s unnecessary and it’s not important at all. We needn’t care about it. It is one’s inner beauty that matters. Second, we sometimes seem to be misunderstood by our teachers, parents and classmates. Facing this, we can find proper time to have a heart-to-heart talk with them, trying to remove the misunderstanding. Some of us have fewer friends. I think being open-minded and friendly will do you good. Third, we may fall behind others, which makes us stressed. Actually we can encourage ourselves to work efficiently, full of determination. Last, some of us don’t have much pocket money, so they feel unhappy. Isn’t it strange? So long as we have some, that’s enough.

That’s all. Thank you.

【解析】

试题分析：

根据提示可知这是材料作文，其格式为发言稿，所以在写作时还应该注意格式。整个发言稿主要可分两部分，第一部分根据材料引出话题，第二部分就表格里的问题进行详细的阐述。因为阅卷时间较为紧张，阅卷老师往往花费极少的时间就浏览完文章，所以在第二段的构思中一定要注意文章结构衔接紧凑，紧扣题目要求，层次分明。在文章的第一段，作者简单直接用一个强调句We high school students do have some growing pains, but we can get rid of them correctly and wisely，引出话题又通过but转折过度第二段将要讲到的问题，简洁自然。第二段中长短句结合，以First，Second，Third和Last表明文章层次，其中非谓语动词的使用十分灵活，为文章增色不少。最后还用到了疑问句，使得文章的句型灵活多变，这一点也是很不错的。

【亮点说明】

这篇范文是典型的发言稿式作文。其结构紧凑，层次分明，文章的第一段简洁明了，第二段分别详细阐述问题，每个问题用几句话分层次展开，简单分析。尤其是第二段过渡词如First，Second，Third和Last的使用非常好，相比其他文章有很大的优势。因为老师在阅卷时耗时较少，在这种情况下，要做的就是尽量使文章层次清晰，过渡词明确，减轻阅读负担。第二段中各种句型灵活变化，如强调句It is one’s inner beauty that matters；现在分词作状语Facing this, we can find proper time to have a heart-to-heart talk with them, trying to remove the misunderstanding；非限制性定语从句we may fall behind others, which makes us stressed；短语do you good等等，这都给文章在细节上添分。