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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文  中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。  增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。修改:在错的词下面画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:

2.只允许修改l0处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I used to feel I was the sun in my family.But when my cousin was born,everyone pays more attention to her.So I disliked her and couldn’t get along well with her. With time went on,I realized how ridiculous I have been at that time.I tried to find a proper time to apologize.When my cousin’s family came to my home a few day ago,I took my cousin to play outside.In the way to the playground.I bought much snacks for her.Then we began chat.When we talked about their childhood,suddenly,I said“sorry”gently.She was silently,so I thought that she hadn’t heard me clearly.But after while she said:“Don’t say that.In my memory,you are always friendly.”

 

1.pays 改成paid 2.With time went on 改成As time went on 或者 With time going on 3.have been 改成had been 4.day 改成days 5.In the way 改成On the way 6.much snacks 改成many snacks 7.chat改成chatting(our chat)或chat前加to 8.their 改成our 9.silently改成silent 10.after while 改成after a while 【解析】 试题分析:考查时态,从句,固定短语等。 1. 改成paid;第二句But when my cousin was born,everyone pays more attention to her前半句为过去式,后半句也应用过去式,故将pays 改成paid 2. time went on 改成As time went on 或者 With time going on;第四句With time went on,有谓语动词,是个句子,with后不能接句子,要么改为状语从句,要么改为伴随状语,故将With time went on 改成As time went on 或者 With time going on 3. been 改成had been;第四句I realized how ridiculous I have been at that time主句为过去式,从句也应是过去式,故将have been 改成had been 4. 改成days;第六句When my cousin’s family came to my home a few day ago,a few修饰可数名词时需是复数,故将day 改成days 5. the way 改成On the way;第七句In the way to the playground,On the way to …是固定短语,在去..的路上,故将In the way 改成On the way 6. snacks 改成many snacks;第八句I bought much snacks for her,much修饰不可数名词,而snacks是可数名词,故将much snacks 改成many snacks 7. chat)或chat前加to;第九句Then we began chat.begin后不能接动词原形,+doing/to do /名词,故将chat改成chatting(our chat)或chat前加to 8. 改成our;第十句When we talked about their childhood应该是谈论我们的童年,故将their 改成our 9. was silently,be动词后接形容词,而silently是副词,故将silently改成silent 10. while 改成after a while;第十二句But after while she said,要表示过了一会儿,应用固定短语after a while,没有after while这个短语,故将after while 改成after a while 考点:考查短文改错
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3.Bolin Chen played a part in the TV drama In Time with You because he_____.

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D.wanted to succeed in the new field

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