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假如你是李华,在一个英文网络论坛上,你看到一个名叫Grown-up的中学生发帖寻求帮助,请根据帖子内容和要求回帖。

Hi, everyone,

I’m 17 years old and I am going to university this autumn. But my mother continues to treat me as a seven-year-old. What should I do?

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告诉Grown-up要理解母亲

给Grown-up解决问题的具体建议。

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Hi, Grown-up, As a student of your age, I understand your situation. The problem you are facing is common among our teenagers. Here are a few suggestions. First, it is advisable to talk more with your mom. Heart-to-heart talks can help you understand each other better. There are also opportunities to let her know your ideas and attitudes toward many things. Second, you should learn to do your own things well, proving to your mom that you are already a “Grown-up”. It is even better if you could share more of the housework, such as cleaning, washing, and cooking. Hope my ideas will work. 【解析】这是一篇书信类写作,根据一封帖子写一篇回帖或说是一篇回信。围绕现在孩子与父母之间的矛盾:孩子希望独立,而父母却不放心,总觉得孩子没长大。考生在写作时要注意联系自己的生活以及周边相关例子,从而提出合理的建议,帮助Grown-up解决问题。注意写作要求,不要遗漏要点。【亮点分析】本文开篇As a student of your age, I understand your situation以身说事,感同身受,使接受建议者看了更具说服力。接着使用一个主语从句The problem you are facing is common among our teenagers.阐述这一问题在青少年中是一个普遍的现象,并给出建议。文章第二段第一句First, it is advisable to talk more with your mom.使用了it作形式主语,后面的不定式作真正的主语的句型,以此作为该段的主旨句。接着使用名词短语Heart-to-heart talks:用心交流、understand each other:相互理解、ideas and attitudes toward many things:看待事情的态度和想法。既起到了给建议的作用,又使文章更加丰富。文章第三段第一句Second, you should learn to do your own things well, proving to your mom that you are already a “Grown-up”.使用非谓语动词形式,立即提高了文章的档次。最后使用if引导的条件状语从句It is even better if you could share more of the housework, such as cleaning, washing, and cooking. 并且将给出的建议具体化,我们可以通过做家务,例如打扫卫生,洗衣洗碗。做饭来向父母证明,我们长大了。整篇文章结构严谨,在提建议时,分别使用first、second,使文章内容更清晰。总结:基本格式为first….. second……finally….(注意各种从句的应用及句型的转换和变化) 考点:考查观点类作文的表达  
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There are lots of experience in our life. The most unforgettable one for me is the speech competition holding last year. I’m interested in English. When my English teacher told me that I had chosen to take part in the speech competition, I devoted me to the preparation. I was determined to win the first prize. I was such nervous when I stood on the stage that I forgot everything. Not until I caught a sight of my teacher did I calm down. Finally,I do a good job. When I heard I got the first prize,my heart was filled in joy and tears rolled down. Through this speech competition,I understand that it is confidence which makes people successfully.

 

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M: Excuse me. Would you mind if I smoked here?

W: I’m sorry. Didn’t you see the sign on the wall, “No 1. ________”?

M: Oh, sorry. 2. ________ can I smoke on this floor?

W: I’m afraid it’s not allowed here.

M: Oh, dear! I wonder 3._______ I could have 4. ________ glass of water.

W: Sure. Help 5.________ (you), over there.

M: Thanks.

W: Don’t you know smoking is not good 6.________ your health, young man?

M: Yes, I do. I tried many times to give it up, but I 7.________(fail). When I go without it, I feel very bad.

W: Yes, it’s hard to stop! 8.______, if you have the nonsmokers’ health in mind, you might succeed.

M: You’re right! Thanks very much. I’ll try again 9.______.

W: That’s good. Well, if you 10.________ (die) to smoke now, you can go outside, in the open air.

M: Oh, no! I’m not smoking anymore from now on!

W: That’s great!

 

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Dear Seth,

You are only three years old, and at this point in your life you are not able to understand this letter. But some day when you        , I hope you will find something       in what I am going to share with you.

Life can be        . There will be people in your life who won’t be very nice. They’ll     you because you are different,      for no good reason. You will also face heartbreak and might be        by those you love. I hope you don’t have to face these too much, but such things     .

Be open to life anyway. You’ll find cruelty and    in your journey through life, but don’t let that     you from finding new things. Don’t retreat(退却) from life, and don’t    or wall yourself off. Be open to new things, new experiences, and new people. You’ll    many times, but if you allow that to stop you from trying, you will    many chances. Do remember failure is a stepping stone to    .

You will meet many people who will try to do    than you, in school, in college and at work. They’ll try to have nicer cars, bigger houses, nicer clothes, and so on. To    , life is a competition. However, I believe life is a    . If you always try your best to    others, you’re wasting your life. Learn to enjoy your life      and you will make it a journey of    , of learning, and of love.

Finally, know that I love you and always will. You are     a really wonderful journey, and I will always be there for you.

1.A. grow up      B. show up    C. cheer up       D. calm down

2.A. familiar    B. valuable    C. normal    D. interesting

3.A. unkind     B. peaceful    C. equal     D. simple

4.A. end up with   B. get on well with C. laugh at   D. look after

5.A. if     B. but        C. so     D. or

6.A. hurt      B. found        C. accepted    D. impressed

7.A. matter        B. work    C. disappear    D. happen

8.A. luck      B. pain       C. difference    D. hope

9.A. protect    B. encourage   C. prevent   D. choose

10.A. forgive        B. struggle        C. compete    D. hide

11.A. leave        B. prepare    C. escape    D. fail

12.A. enjoy       B. try     C. miss    D. meet

13.A. success    B. life     C. action    D. sorrow

14.A. earlier    B. better    C. less     D. faster

15.A. you        B. me       C. him     D. them

16.A. challenge       B. drama    C. journey    D. dream

17.A. change    B. pardon    C. follow    D. beat

18.A. somewhere   B. instead    C. afterwards   D. though

19.A. cruelty    B. danger        C. happiness   D. quietness

20.A. starting    B. destroying   C. recreating   D. replacing

 

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There was once a lonely girl who longed so much for love. One day while she was walking in the woods she found two starving birds    1.  . She cared them with love and the birds grew strong. Every morning they greeted her with a wonderful song. The girl felt the great love from the birds.

2.  . The larger and the stronger of the two birds flew from the cage. The girl was so frightened that he would fly away. As he flew close, she grasped him wildly. Her heart felt glad at her success in capturing him.  3.  . She opened her hand and stared in horror at the dead bird. Her desperate love had killed him.

She noticed the other bird moving back and forth on the edge of the cage. She could feel his great need for freedom. He needed to fly into the clear, blue sky.  4.   . The bird circled once, twice, three times.

The girl watched delightedly at the bird’s enjoyment.  5.  . She wanted the bird to be happy. Suddenly the bird flew closer and landed softly on her shoulder. It sang the sweetest songs that she had ever heard.

The fastest way to lose love is to hold on it too tight, while the best way to keep love is to give it wings!

A. She gave them some delicious food and left.

B. Suddenly she felt the bird go softly.

C. Her heart was no longer concerned with her loss.

D. One day she left with the two birds at home alone.

E. She took them home and put them in a small cage.

F. One day the girl left the door of the cage open.

G. She lifted him from the cage and threw him softly into the air.

 

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Teenagers are often a difficult group. With all those hormones(荷尔蒙) flooding their bodies, they can be moody, unpredictable, and tend to make uncertain choices. But however confusing their teenage years are, kids can still be generally happy, depending on their lifestyle choices. According to a new research by British scientists, teens who don’t smoke, drink only moderately or not at all, and who don’t eat much junk food are likely to be happier than other teens.

The study looked at 40,000 British families and came up with some interesting findings. For example, kids who never drank alcohol were up to six times more likely to report higher levels of happiness than kids who drank. And teens who smoked were five times less likely to rate high on happiness charts compared to kids who don’t smoke. Same goes for diet and physical activity. The more fruits and vegetables kids eat, and the more hours they spend playing sports, the happier they are.

Now, of course this doesn’t mean that not smoking or drinking, and playing sports guarantees happiness. It could be that kids who have happy character tend to be more active and less addicted to drinking or smoking. And it could equally be the case that kids who are unhappy are more related to drinking and smoking and eating junk food.

Other studies have shown that exercise is a proven way to treat anxiety and depression. Future studies may support the idea that other healthful behaviors, including refraining(克制) from smoking, drinking, and eating too much junk, can avoid sadness and increase happiness, too.

1.What can we learn from the text?

A. Not smoking or drinking guarantees happiness.

B. Teens with flooding hormones can not be happy.

C. Playing sports can decrease teen’s unhappiness.

D. Unhappiness can certainly result in smoking and drinking.

2.Which of the following might help teens quit anxiety?

A. Smoking and drinking.   B. Taking exercise.

C. Eating junk food.       D. Going on a diet.

3.Which can be the best title for the text?

A. Ways to treat anxiety and depression.

B. Exercise and teenagers’ health.

C. Teenagers shouldn’t drink or smoke.

D. Teenagers’ lifestyle and their happiness.

 

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