Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2．只允许修改10处

Recently I have read an article in a magazine. It was about the mother who was worried about her son just because of he always kept his hair long. The mother thought that was not right, but the son felt there was nothing unusually about it. Different generations have different opinion on the same thing. That is what is meaning by "the generation gap". We can see them in our daily lives. Most of our parents like listening to old songs when young people prefer pop songs. Every time my father finds me listen to rock music, he always shouted, "Shut it off. It's awful!" How can we deal the generation gap?

Answer

1.the 改为 a mother

2.because of去掉of

3.unusually 改为unusual

4.opinion改为opinions

5.meaning改成meant

6.we can see them改成it

7.when改成while

8.listen改成listening

9.shouted改成shouts

10.deal 后面加with

【解析】

1.1】.此处是泛指，表示“关于一个妈妈”，故把 the 改为 a mother。

2.2】because of 后面不能跟完整的句子，he always kept his hair long 是一个完整的句子，故because of去掉of。此处是because引导的原因状语从句。

3.3】nothing是不定代词，形容词修饰不定代词，且放在不定代词后面，故把 unusually 改为unusual。

4.4】此处表达的是不同的观点，所以opinion要用复数，故把opinion改为opinions。

5.5】固定搭配what is meant by…这个的意思是指...，故把meaning改成meant。

6.6】“在日常生活中我们也能看到它”，这里的它指"the generation gap"，故把we can see them改成it。

7.7】此处不是时间状语从句而是一个并列句，表示前后形成鲜明对比，“然而”，故把when改成while。

8.8】“每次我父亲发现我听摇滚乐时”，此处表示正在听，用现在分词作宾语补足语，故把listen改成listening.

9.9】“每次我父亲发现我听摇滚乐时，他都冲着我大声喊”，此处表达的是一般现在时态，故把shouted改成shouts。

10.10】考查固定搭配。“我们怎样处理这代沟”?故deal 后面加with。deal with处理

考点：考查短文改错。