Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下写出该加的词。

删除: 把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。

There will be a speech on our school playground this Saturday afternoon, which theme is “To civilize schoolyard is my responsibility”. All the teachers and students required to attend. In the activity, the first two winner in each grade will give such valuable advice as follows: we should not litter somewhere in order to keep our campus clean; we should love flowers, grass and trees such that everyone can enjoy the greenness; we should behave well instead of run after one another, quarreling and fighting noisy; we should care for the others so that our school will be full with love. We believe your school will become more and more beautiful and peaceful.

Answer

1.which— whose

2.required前加are

3.winner— winners

4.somewhere— anywhere

5.trees后的such— so

6.run— running

7.noisy— noisily

8.others前的the去掉

9.with— of 或full—filled

10.your→our

【解析】

试题分析：本文考查了介词，名词，非谓语动词，固定搭配等知识。

1.which— whose，考查定语从句，先行词是speech，指物应该用whose。故which改成whose。

2.required前加are，考查被动语态，师生应该是被要求参加，故required前面加are。

3. winners ，考查名词复数，winner前面修饰词是the first two,前面2个应该使用复数。故winner改为winners。

4. anywhere，考查不定代词，前面是we should not litter somewhere，与not一起使用的不能是somewhere，somewhere一半表示肯定。故somewhere改成anywhere。

5. trees后的such— so，考查搭配，so that表示顺承前面的结果，such that没有此用法，故such改为so。

6. run— running，考查连词，instead of后面只能接名词或者动名词，不能用动词，故run改为running。

7. noisily，考查副词，noisy修饰的是fighting，只有副词才能修饰动名词，故noise改为noisily.

8. others前的the去掉,考查的是代词的用法，others表示的就是其他人，不用加the，故去掉the。

9. of 或full—filled。考查固定搭配，be full of 和be filled with都可以，故with改为 of 或full改为filled。

10. our 。考查第一人称。前面是We，与后面要一致，也应该是第一人称，故把your改为our。

考点：考查短文改错。