假段定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有
10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处
加一个漏字符号(
)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。
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We all want to grow up happily and healthy, and for this goal we must do several things. Firstly, we should develop good attitude for life. Life consist of not only sunshine but also hard time. We should be brave in front of difficulties. Secondly, we must study hard because of knowledge is power. If we have the power, we can help to build your country and enjoy life better. In order to study well, we need to do sport so that we can keep fitness. We can go running, playing ball games but simply take a walk after a day’s study. If we do those things well, we will be able to grow up happily and healthily.
阅读下面材料，在空白处填入适当的内容（不多于3个单词）或括号内单词的正确形式。
Do you know the famous Icehotel at Jukkasjarvi in Swenden? Every year a team of builders and artists from 1. over the world come to the little village of Jukkasjarvi and build 2. hotel out of snow and ice. In the spring it 3. (melt) and the next year they start all over again. The hotel is a short drive form the airport, and is 4. (suit) for most people except families with very young children.
5. late December and early January ice rooms will be ready for guests 6. other parts of the hotel will be unfinished. If you come at this time you will be able to watch the artists 7. (make) their sculptures. If you prefer to see the hotel once everything is completed then the best time to travel is from the middle of January. Various activities 8. (organization) for guests at the Icehotel. There are guided tours of the hotel in English and Swedish at various times of the day. You’ll also have the chance to make your own ice sculpture. Classes are at 11a.m. daily. The hotel provides all the ice and tools you need and hot drinks---- you just bring your ideas. There are also two different trips, both quite 9. (reason) priced. 10. is a climbing trip to the top of Mount Puimonen. The other is a 5km cross country skiing trip. A driver takes you out and then you ski back to the hotel. It is a good idea to book these activities at least three weeks before your arrival as they fill up quickly.
阅读下面短文，从短文后各题所给的四个选项（A、B、C和D）中，选出可以填人空白处的
最佳选项，并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。
Last night I wrote an article for the school newspaper that described how I feel right now in honest terms．I emailed it to our wonderful ，and after she it, she asked a very good question：“Do you want the school body，including our senior class and the teaching to read this?”
That question pretty much my thoughts．I’m not a very person；I tend to let only a few friends know what’s going on in my life．I suppose that’s my personality says the opposite to itself, because I’m also an honest person ．
Being honest is ．It involves taking risks-huge risks-and putting on the edge． to someone can be the hardest thing for you in the world and either lead to the hurt of feeling or friendships．During the course of my life，I've experienced ．
In positive ways，being honest can be a ．Pretending is not only difficult， it’s very tiring．Last year， I discovered that I could be open with two people whom I was already good friends with，the load on my shoulders felt much ．Telling someone your feelings is scary；trusting someone your heart and soul is hard．Of course，putting one’s feelings into for the general population to read is also rather frightening．
1.A．editor B．coach C．e-pal D．supervisor
2.A．deleted B．read C．forwarded D．reserved
3.A．entire B．junior C．main D．key
4.A．member B．clerk C．staff D．fellow
5.A．agreed B．controlled C．supported D．matched
6.A．easygoing B．shy C．optimistic D．open
7.A．exactly B．rarely C．roughly D．usually
8.A．how B．what C．where D．When
9.A．exciting B．simple C．boring D．difficult
10.A．everybody B．yourself C． somebody D．myself
11.A．Showing off B．Opening up C．Getting down D．Looking up
12.A．unreliable B．weaker C．permanent D．stronger
13.A．either B．neither C．both D．nothing
14.A．burden B．dream C．goal D．release
15.A．but B．while C．also D．meanwhile
16.A．in which B．when C．during which D．which
17.A．heavier B. unpredictable C．1ighter D．unbearable
18.A．miserable B．secret C．strong D．joyful
19.A．by B．via C．with D．beyond
20.A．reality B．use C．practice D．print
根据短文内容，从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项为多余选项。
Learn to Think
“ I will think of it ”. It is easy to say this. _1._ We can not see our thoughts, or hear , or taste, or feel them; and yet what mighty power they have!
Sir Isaac Newton was seated in his garden on a summer’s evening, when he saw an apple fall from a tree. __2.__ Later , he discovered how the earth , sun moon, and stars were kept in their places.
_3.__He began to think; he wanted to find out why the steam in the kettle moved the heavy lid. From that time he went on thinking and think. When he became a man, he improved the steam engine so much that it could, with the greatest ease, do the work of many horses. 4._
A man named Galileo was once standing in the cathedral of Pisa, when he saw a chandelier swaying to and fro. This set him thinking, and it led to the invention of the pendulum.
Boys, when you have a difficult lesson to learn, don’t feel discouraged, and help yourselves before asking someone to help you. _5.__
A. But do you know what great things have come from thinking?
B. Think, and by thinking you will learn how to think to some purpose.
C. A boy named James Watt sat quietly by the fireside, watching the lid of the tea kettle as it moved up and down .
D. And do you know how to think?
E. When you see a steamboat , a steam mill, remember that it would never have been built if it had not been for the hard thinking of someone .
F. He began to think, trying to find out why the apple fell.
G. He was a famous physicist and good at thinking.
Most children have heard their parents at one time or another yell “sit up straight!” or “don’t slouch!” In the past, this was usually heard at the dinner table as children ate dinner. But these days, it is also heard around another activity – video games.
Ten-year old Owaish Batliwala, from Mumbai, India, admits he spends three to four hours each day playing games on his tablet computer. His mother Mehzabin became concerned when her son started saying that his neck hurt. She said, "My son started having neck problems around June or July. The pain slowly spread to his hand and his back. He plays for hours on the iPad and mobile phone. This is what has caused the problem."
Sadia Vanjara is a physical therapist. She says the number of young children with chronic pain in their necks, arms and shoulders is on the rise. Dr. Vanjara says the pain is not from aging, accidents or disease. It is from poor posture, or body position, while playing video games.
This is a problem in many parts of the world. But there are more smartphone users in India than anywhere else in the world, except China. Networking equipment company Cisco estimates that the number of smartphone users in India will increase from 140 million today to 651 million by 2020.
19-year old student Nida Jameel says she feels pain in the finger which holds the weight of her smartphone most of the day. She says she uses her smartphone 24/7. This means 24 hours a day, seven days a week, or all the time.
Dr. Vanjara says the best treatments for the pain are daily exercises. Experts advise taking breaks from using a computer or other device often. Stand up. Stretch your legs, back, shoulders and arms. And when your work or school work is done, unplug and exercise.
1. What can be the best title of the passage?
A. Too Much Gaming is a Pain in the Neck
B. The Influence of Too Much Gaming on People’s Health
C. How To Avoid the Pain in the Neck
D. How To Be More Fit
2.In paragraph 1, the underlined word “slouch” means _____
A. stopping working
B. bending one’s head or shoulders forward
C. being much too calm about something
D. being enthusiastic about the things that are not related with study
3. In which part of a website can we read the passage?
A. School and Education B. Entertainment
C. Health and Lifestyle D. Food and Recipes
Dear daughter,
As we drove off from Columbia, I wanted to write a letter to you to tell you all that is on my mind.
I want to tell you how proud we are. Getting into Columbia is a real testament of what a great well-rounded student you are. Your academic, artistic, and social skills have truly blossomed in the last few years. You have become a talented and accomplished young woman.
College will be the most important years in your life. It is in college that you will truly discover what learning is about. You often question "what good is this course". I encourage you to be inquisitive, but I also want to tell you: "Education is what you have left after all that is taught is forgotten." What I mean by that is the materials taught isn't as important as you gaining the ability to learn a new subject, and the ability to analyze a new problem. That is really what learning in college is about – this will be the period where you go from teacher-taught to master-inspired, after which you must become self-learner. So do take each subject seriously, and even if what you learn isn't critical for your life, the skills of learning will be something you cherish forever.
Follow your passion in college. Take courses you think you will enjoy. Don't be trapped in what others think or say. Steve Jobs says when you are in college, your passion will create many dots, and later in your life you will connect them. In his great speech given at Stanford commencement, he gave the great example where he took calligraphy, and a decade later, it became the basis of the beautiful Macintosh fonts, which later ignited desktop publishing, and brought wonderful tools like Microsoft Word to our lives. His expedition into calligraphy was a dot, and the Macintosh became the connecting line. Enjoy picking your dots, and be assured one day you will find your calling, and connect a beautiful curve through the dots of yourself .
Most importantly, make friends and be happy. College friends are often the best in life, because during college you are closer to them physically than to your family. Also, going through independence and adulthood is a natural bonding experience.
So please treasure your college years – make the best of your free time, become an independent thinker in control of your destiny, evolve yourself into a bi-cultural talent, be bold to experiment, learn and grow through your successes and challenges.
When I faced the greatest challenge and opportunity in my life in 2005, you gave me a big hug and said "bonne chance", which means "good luck" and "good courage". Now I do the same for you. Bonne chance, my angel and princess. May Columbia become the happiest four years in your life, and may you blossom into just what you dream to be.
Love,
Dad (& Mom)
1.What can we learn from the passage?
A. The daughter is a well-rounded college student.
B. The father faced the greatest challenge in 2006.
C. The daughter is a freshman in college.
D. Steve Jobs gave the great example where he took calligraphy at Columbia commencement.
2.The father may agree that _____.
A. you will be well-educated if you forget all is taught
B. there are only master-inspired students in college
C. the daughter will be thinner if she goes on a diet
D. the skills of learning is very important for his daughter’s life
3.The example of Steve Jobs in Paragraph 4 is to show _____.
A. how Steve Jobs invented the basis of the Macintosh fonts
B. it is important for the daughter to follow her passion in college
C. Steve Jobs made great contributions to Microsoft Word
D. the father wishes his daughter to be as successful as Steve Jobs
4.College friends are often the best to you because_____.
A. your family are far away while college friends are around you within an easy reach
B. they are closer to you psychologically than to your family
C. they are better than your family
D. going through independence and adulthood is unusual bonding experience
