Question

假定你负责某一个学生英文报纸的“求助”栏目，最近收到一封求助信，全文如下：

Dear helpful,

I am a new senior middle school student. I have some trouble in learning English. When I entered this school, I made up my mind to learn English well. I spent much time reading and writing but I couldn’t make much progress. I can’t read the text smoothly. In class I am unable to understand what the teacher is saying in English. I am in great trouble. I’m afraid I will not catch up with my classmates forever. What should I do?

Yours,                                                                       Troubled

请根据求助信的内容写一封回信, 在信中给出一些学好英语的建议。

注意：1.回信一定要有针对性；           2.词数：120词左右。

Dear Troubled,

Having learnt about the difficulties and problems of your learning English,

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Yours truly,

Helpful

Answer

Dear Troubled,

Having learnt about the difficulties and problems of your learning English, I can’t help writing this letter to express my view of learning English.

It is not very difficult to learn English well. (Now you are not good at English——it is likely that you didn’t study hard in junior middle school.) You still have the chance to catch up with others, so you shouldn’t lose heart. To learn English well, one must learn the new words by heart and go over the old ones on time. You’d better spend half an hour reading and learning the words by heart, new or old. And you must also spend some time reading the texts aloud, which can help improve your ability of listening and grammar you have learned. This knowledge can help you to write standard English. In addition, listening is very important, you can watch more English programms on TV or pick up English programms on the radio. The more you listen to English，the easier it becomes.

I hope you will find these proposals / suggestions / recommendations practical / useful / helpful.

Yours truly,

Helpful

【解析】

试题分析：假定你负责某一个学生英文报纸的“求助”栏目，最近收到一封求助信，全文如下：

Dear helpful,

I am a new senior middle school student. I have some trouble in learning English. When I entered this school, I made up my mind to learn English well. I spent much time reading and writing but I couldn’t make much progress. I can’t read the text smoothly. In class I am unable to understand what the teacher is saying in English. I am in great trouble. I’m afraid I will not catch up with my classmates forever. What should I do?

Yours, Troubled

请根据求助信的内容写一封回信, 在信中给出一些学好英语的建议。注意：1.回信一定要有针对性；2.词数：120词左右。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯.写作时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。一定避免全部使用简单句。

【亮点说明】It is not very difficult to learn English well.句中用动词不定式做真正的主语；You still have the chance to catch up with others, so you shouldn’t lose heart.运用了并列句，同时剧中出现了两个固定搭配catch up with和lose heart；To learn English well, one must learn the new words by heart and go over the old ones on time.动词不定式作目的状语；And you must also spend some time reading the texts aloud, which can help improve your ability of listening and grammar you have learned.句中恰当地使用了相知性定语从句和非限制性定语从句；In addition, listening is very important, you can watch more English programms on TV or pick up English programms on the radio. In addition用的很到位；The more you listen to English，the easier it becomes. 比较专于从句的运用更添光彩； I hope you will find these proposals / suggestions / recommendations practical / useful / helpful.最后一句出现了宾语从句的用法。

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