Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

2015 Spring Festival is coming now. I plan buy something for my parents. What I want to give them back is a VIP card for a health club but they need enough exercise. My father works hardly as a teacher, spent most of his time at school. My mother loves reading and often buried herself in her books. Therefore, all of them should exercise more from now on.

I want to give them this card to express my thank and love. I hope that they will be able to get relaxing in the health club and make more friends there. At the same time, I hope that they can take care with their health.

Answer

1.buy→ to buy

2.去掉back

3.but → since / because

4.hardly → hard

5.spent → spending

6.buried → buries

7.all → both

8.thank → thanks

9.relaxing → relaxed

10.with→ of

【解析】

试题分析：2015年春节快到了，作者给家人准备了健身卡作为礼物。父亲和母亲一位工作的原因生活中缺少运动和锻炼，作者希望家人能身体健康。

1.buy→ to buy考查动词搭配。Plan to do sth“计划做某事”。

2.去掉back考查动词短语搭配。Give back“归还，送回，恢复”，不符合题意。

3.but → since / because考察关联词。But表示转折关系，此处上句与下句是因果关系，故改成since或because。

4.hardly → hard考查副词。Hardly“几乎不，简直不”；hard“努力地，强烈地，严重地”，hard符合题意。

5.spent → spending考查独立主格。Spend和my father之间是主谓关系，而句子中已经存在谓语works，所以spend改成现在分词spending。

6.buried → buries考查关联词。My mother loves reading and often buried herself in her books.中love 和bury是并列关系，my mother为主语，故bury用第三人称。

7.all → both考察代词。根据上文可知all代指my father和my mother，但只有三者和三者以上才用all，both代指两个人。

8.thank → thanks考查名词。Love为不可数名词，thank与love是并列关系，保持一致改为名词形式，故thank改为thanks。

9.relaxing → relaxed考查动词固定用法。Get sb to do“使某人做某事”；get done“变成某种状态”，get 作连系动词。

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考点：考查语法知识