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My cousin Xiao Hong and I went on a trip to my uncle’s on last Sunday. We were riding along a hillside while suddenly some big stones rolled down and knocked them off our bikes. Xiao Hong’s legs got seriously hurt and so did I. We couldn’t move a bit. Lucky, I saw some farmers ahead. Waving our hand, we cried for help. On hearing us, they ran to the spot as fast as they can. Thanks to their help, both of us were sent for a nearby hospital and treating in time. Though we did not know them, but we felt as if we were friends.
Have you ever asked yourself why children go to school? You will 1. (probable) say that they go to school to learn languages, arithmetic, history, science and some other knowledge. That is quite true, but 2. do they learn these things?
We send our children to school 3. (prepare) them for the time when they will be big and will have to work for themselves. Nearly everything they study at school has some practical use in their life. But is that 4. only reason why they go to school?
There is more in education than just 5. (learn) facts. We go to school to learn how to learn, so that when we have left school we can continue to learn. A man 6. really knows how to learn will always be successful, because when he has to do something new, he will not only be able to do it well himself, he will but also be able to teach 7. how to do it in the best way. The 8. (educate) person, on the other hand, is either unable to do something new, or just 9. it badly. The purpose of schools, therefore, is 10. (teach) languages, arithmetic, history science, etc., but to teach pupils the way to learn.
Several days ago, I met a stranger in the street who stopped and asked me directions． I to show him the way to the destination, but to my , he coldly refused my offer. I asked him why. Finally he told me he was I would ask him for money if I him in this way.
Money! I deep into thought. Is it money that comes between us? Money has no , it cannot be with good or bad.
The problem what attitude we have towards it.
At present, we have a more material life than ever before, but we’re becoming more and more . Why? In my opinion, the is the change in people’s personal .They wrongly believe that money should be their only aim in life, so they all sorts of ways they can to this aim.
They are afraid of being and fooled. If everyone thinks like this, what will our be like?
Needless to say，money is becoming more and more important in our society, it shouldn’t be the “be-all and end-all” of life. If a person only concentrates on , he will be lonely and void(空虚), and even go astray(犯错误).
It is up to us to make our lives happy, not money. We should try our best to help others and freely. If everyone does so, our society will be better and better.
1.A．advised B．offered C．asked D．wished
2.A．joy B．fear C．excitement D．surprise
3.A．anxious B．afraid C．sorry D．glad
4.A．stopped B．told C．asked D．helped
5.A．kept B．felt C．fell D．caught
6.A．problem B．price C．life D．use
7.A．joined B．judged C．connected D．seemed
8.A．takes in B．depends on C．leads to D．smooths away
9.A．powerful B．beautiful C．plentiful D．healthy
10.A．cold-hearted B．warm-hearted C．good-looking D．humorous
11.A．key B．money C．man D．creature
12.A．worth B．habits C．fame D．values
13.A．taking B．habits C．making D．spending
14.A．think up B．pick up C．go up D．come up
15.A．realize B．recognize C．take D．shoot
16.A．found B．discovered C．cheated D．followed
17.A．life B．society C．belief D．money
18.A．or B．but C．if D．since
19.A．life B．nature C．society D．money
20.A．separately B．obviously C．mainly D．whole-heartedly
Many people think of guys as being carefree when it comes to their appearance. But in fact, a lot of guys spend plenty of time in front of the mirror. 1. .
Body image is a persons opinions and feelings about his or her own body and physical appearance. 2. . You appreciate your body for its capabilities and accept its imperfections.
So, what can you do to develop a positive body image? Here are some ideas:
Recognize your strengths. Different body types are good for different things. What does your body do well? Maybe your speed, strength, or coordination makes you better than others at a certain sport. That may be basketball, table tennis, mountain biking, dancing, or even running. Or perhaps you have non-sports skills, like drawing, painting, singing, playing a musical instrument, writing, or acting. 3. .
Exercise regularly. Exercise can help you look good and feel good about yourself. Good physiques (体形) don’t just happen. 4. . A healthy habit can be as simple as exercising 20 minutes to one hour three days a week. Working out can also lift your spirits.
Respect your body! Practicing good habits --- regular showering; taking care of your teeth, hair, and skin; wearing clean clothes, and so on --- can help you build a positive body image.
5. . Your body is just one part of who you are. Your talent for comedy, a quick wit (智慧), and all the other things make you unique. So try not to let small imperfections take over.
A. Use this as an opportunity to discover what you’re good at.
B. Be yourself.
C. They care just as much as girls do about their body image.
D. Just explore talents that you feel good about.
E. They take hard work, regular workouts, and a healthy diet.
F. The good news is that self-image and body image can be changed.
G. Having a positive body image means feeling satisfied with the way you look.
San Francisco(People's Daily Online)-- Apple Inc. Tuesday introduced its mobile payment service Apple Pay alongside the company's iPhone 6 Plus and Apple Watch at the Flint Center in Cupertino, California.
What apple does is to replace consumers' wallet with its cell phone. Apple said it hopes to speed up the checkout process, make credit-card payments more secure and ultimately, to replace physical wallets.
With the near-field communication technology, Apple's gadgets like iPhone and Apple watch can transmit a radio signal between the device and a receiver when the two are in an inch apart. "To pay, just hold your iPhone near the contactless reader with your finger on Touch ID. You don’t even have to look at the screen to know your payment information was successfully sent," Apple says on its official website.
Apple said that each transaction (交易)would be authorized(授权) with a one-time, unique number, creating a security code that it said is more secure than the one on the back of your credit card because cashiers wont see your name, card number or security code. The service will work with the three major payment networks — American Express, MasterCard and Visa — and Apple said that there are 220,000 merchant locations that accept these contactless payments.
When some applaud this disrupted service that will compete with Paypal and endanger other online payment companies, some others concern about its safety, especially when another retailer Home Depot confirmed a data opening yesterday and iCloud was reported exposing nude (裸体)pictures of celebrities (名人) a week ago.
Leo Zheng, a technology reporter in Silicon Valley said: "When Apple attracts consumers to put all their cards into one iPhone and promised the security, Jennifer Lawrence should say something."
1.Which can be the best title for the passage?
A.Apple announces mobile payment service to replace consumers' wallet.
B．Consumers can pay in cash through mobile phones.
C．Apple Inc. will introduce new models to the market.
D．Mobile payment will be popular soon.
2. After reading the third paragraph, we know .
A．Apple’s new products are popular
B．Apple can be used as an ID
C．Apple's gadgets can receive message easily
D．how Apple's gadgets work
3.The attitude of the writer towards the mobile payment is .
A．indifferent (冷漠的) B．objective
C．skeptical D．positive
4. What could have happened to Jennifer Lawrence?
A．She made great contributions to Apple.
B．She put all her cards into her iPhone.
C．Her nude pictures were spread online.
D．Her iPhone often broke down.
Your House Will Take Care of You In Old Age
Have you ever thought what your life would be like in old age?
Everyone talks about the “aging” society with large numbers of elderly people needing home care. Now German researchers have set up a “smart” house, programmed to help the elderly live at home with dignity. Scientists at Germany’s Fraunhofer Institute say the house combines existing technology with future-oriented technology.
For example, the “smart” bathroom has a touch screen mirror that can remind people to take their medicine, wash their hands or brush their teeth. The hardware behind Fraunhofer’s electronic bathroom is not new, and the software runs on a regular personal computer.
When the medicine cabinet is opened, a display in the middle of the mirror tells the person how many pills to take. The mirror is linked to a care provider, who can remotely check whether a patient at home is actually taking medicine and brushing his or her teeth. As many elderly people have arthritic(关节炎的) conditions that make it difficult to operate water taps, the mirror also has displays that turn the water tap on or off or control the water temperature.
The bathroom is only the start. Kitchens, bedrooms and all other parts of the intelligent” home will become “user-friendly” to meet all kinds of individual needs. Sensors in doors, toilets, taps, light switches and carpets detect every activity and record them electronically. Doctors or care staff can see from the computer records what personal hygiene tasks have been completed, how often the elderly person visits the bathroom or uses the toilet. In case of an emergency, the computer automatically alerts the chosen contact person or calls the care center.
1.The smart bathroom has a touch screen mirror ____.
A. that can remind people to do many things
B. which is linked to a nursing house
C. behind which is a medicine cabinet
D. that can help the elderly brush their teeth
2.The underlined word them in the last paragraph refers to ___.
A. sensors
B. doors, toilets, taps, light switches and carpets
C. individual needs
D. every activity
3.How is the passage mainly developed?
A. By inferring. B. By comparing.
C. By listing examples. D. By introducing a practical method.
4. The author of the text mainly ___.
A. calls on people to care for the old
B. introduces a new house
C. promotes a new house
D. encourages the old to live with dignity
