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Last weekend we went mountain climbing. Even the heavy rain in the morning could not prevent us go. Setting off very early, we went along an extreme narrow road, all in high spirits. On every side of the road were green fields and some farm house. We can hear the sound of the rain and our footsteps mixing with our laughter. At noon we reached the top of the mountain. That surprised us most there was the beauty of scenes .After having a short rest there and sharing with the food we had brought, we started going down. It rained even harder. We were wet to the skin, and we still sang and laughed happily.
A Frenchman went to a small Italian town and stayed with his wife at1. best hotel there. One night, he went out for a walk alone. It was late and the small street was dark and quiet. 2. (sudden) he felt someone behind him. He turned his head and saw an Italian young man 3. walked past him quickly. The man was nearly out of sight when the Frenchman found that his watch4. (go). He thought that it5. be the Italian who had taken his watch. He decided6. (follow) him and get back the watch.
Soon the Frenchman caught up with the Italian. 7. of them understood the other's language. The Frenchman frightened the Italian with his fist (拳头) while 8. (point) at the Italian's watch. In the end the Italian gave up his watch to the Frenchman.
When he returned to the hotel, the Frenchman told his wife 9. had happened. He was greatly surprised when his wife pointed to the watch on the table. Now he realized that he had robbed the watch10. mistake.
I was fifteen when I walked into Black Stump Bookstore in Liverpool. As I was looking at on the shelves, the shop owner asked if I’d like I needed to start for college, so I said yes. I worked after school and during summers for the lowest wages, and the job helped my first year of college. I had worked in many other jobs: I made coffee in the Students’ Union during college, I was a hotel maid and I make maps for the Forest Service. But selling books was one of the most .
One day a woman asked me for books on women’s diseases. She seemed fearful. I showed her almost everything we had at that time and found other books we could order. She left the store less . I’ve always remembered the felt in having helped her.
Years later, as a in London, I heard about a black child born his fingers connected. His family could not a corrective operation, and the boy lived in hiding his hand in pocket. I my boss to let me do the story. After my story was broadcast, a doctor and a nurse called, offering to perform the for free. I visited the boy in the room soon after the operation. The first thing he did was to hold up his hand and say “ Thank you.” I felt a sense of
In the past I was at Black Stump Bookstore, I always sensed I was working for the customers, not the store. Today, it’s the same. BBC News pays m , but I feel as if I work for the viewers, helping them understand the world.
1.A. maps B. titles C. articles D. reports
2.A. a book B. any help C. any suggestions D. a job
3.A. planning B. leaving C. preparing D. studying
4.A. pay for B. fit for C. run for D. enter for
5.A. so B. never C. even D. still
6.A. boring B. exciting C. satisfying D. disappointing
7.A. in need B. in all C. in order D. in store
8.A. worried B. surprised C. doubted D. puzzled
9.A. pride B. failure C. regret D. wonder
10.A. doctor B. store owner C. bookseller D. TV reporter
11.A. in B. with C. by D. for
12.A. pay B. offer C. afford D. spend
13.A. peace B. honor C. horror D. danger
14.A. chose B. forced C. persuaded D. permitted
15.A. action B. program C. treatment D. operation
16.A. waiting B. recovery C. reading D. guest
17.A. repaired B. connected C. injured D. improved
18.A. pleasure B. sadness C. humor D. responsibility
19.A. if B. though C. until D. while
20.A. prize B. salary C. cost D. bill
From time to time, we all get a bit down. Maybe we are feeling bad because we’re not doing well with our goals. There are many reasons for feeling down, but I’m not able to discuss all of them. ___1.__
Make a list. Sometimes we are sad simply because we are troubled by all the things we have to do. __2.__ Make a list of the most pressing things you have to do. Thus you’re getting things under control. You can see, right in front of you, what you need to do, and that can pick up your mood.
__3.___ You’ve made a list, and you still feel puzzled? Well, get started on the first thing you need to do. Once you get into action, you’ll feel better. And once you start doing something, you will feel much better than lying around feeling sorry for yourself.
___4.__ I like Brown Eyed Girl, the Kinks, the Ramones, or an upbeat Beatles tune. You might have your own brand of feel-good music. Whatever it is, let yourself move to the beat. It may just be what the doctor ordered.
Talk about it. Get a best friend, family member or coworker you can talk to. ____5.__ It can also help you work out the reasons you’re feeling down.
A. Take action.
B. Play some lively music.
C. Get out of the house and do something.
D. Getting things off your chest makes a big difference.
E. Start simply by picking up a piece of paper and a pen.
F. Do whatever you need to do to feel good about yourself.
G. What I can talk about are some things that have worked for me.
To many students, high school is just a basic routine. You go to class in the morning, take a break for lunch and go home in the afternoon.
This isn't quite that simple for pupils at Royal West Academy. As if classes and homework weren’t already enough, students are also required to complete a range of extracurricular activities, or ECAs.
The range of ECAs being offered at the school is various, including everything from guitar and jewelry-making clubs, fund-raising marches, to student committees, swimming and tennis.
“I love ECAs. I’m so happy we have them,” said grade 11 student Adrienne, who is a soccer player and member of the graduation committee. “They motivate the students, and they’re a great bonding experience. I think that without them, not half as many students would be joining up for the soccer team.”
Requiring students to complete ECAs is a sign of the times. That’s because young people are preparing for the future in ways that weren’t considered necessary before. This is an era when ECAs are seen as important. Whether it’s for leadership experience, sports, craft skills or volunteer these things are seen as rounding out the individual and improving their future.
ECAs can also help students discover their likes and dislikes. But as the old song says, you can’t always get what you want, especially when so many students are all trying to sign up for the most popular activities.
ECAs can cut into study and homework time if you’re not careful. You really have to get organized or you’ll fall apart.
1.The students at Royal West Academy may do the following ECAs except ______.
A. to play musical instruments
B. to raise money for an organization
C. to attend sports events
D. to have classes discussions
2.From what Adirienne said, we know that _______.
A. most of his classmates are interested in football
B. one can make many new friends in ECAs
C. students get encouraged to join in ECAs
D. half of his classmates are unwilling to join in ECAs.
3.Why are ECAs important now?
A. They prepare the students for their future.
B. They can make students get what they want.
C. they can help students find their strong points.
D. They can reduce students’ learning time.
4.From the last paragraph, we can infer that _______.
A. ECAs can increase your burden of learning
B. you may fall down when playing in ECAs
C. too many ECAs may leave you in trouble
D. you need to organize other students in ECAs
1.With help from a Mr.H, you can .
A. stop using batteries.
B. finish your homework on time.
C. remember your teacher’s instructions.
D. get your room tidied on your way home.
2.A PENGO WATCH CONTROL can help you to .
A. repair your TV B. organize your homework
C. be a James Bond D. know what the weather is like
3.You can get your Mr. H for .
A. ＄499 B. ＄299 C. ＄199 D. ＄99
4.Where would you be most likely to find the two texts?
A. On a notice board B. In a company brochure.
C. On a teenage website D. In a college newspaper.
