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My grandparents live in the countryside.They keep a dog calling Ah Bao.One day my grandparents go to work in the fields,taking along my little brother and Ah Bao.My brother and Ah Bao came to a river nearby and enjoyed himself. My brother was trying to catch a butterfly while he fell into a river.Ah Bao barked and immediate jumped into a water.Hearing about him barking,my grandparents hurried there and saw Ah Bao swimming towards the bank carrying my brother .Ah Bao did all he could save my little brother,that moved all the people present.Everyone praised Ah Bao for his brave and kindness.
Most people nowadays are so busy with their lives that they do not have time to enjoy a healthy and 1.(balancel)diet.For most individuals,as 2. result of eating foods rich in fats and sugar several years,they choose to go on a diet but do not succeed at the end.Be sure to be with a strong 3.(aware)that you are 4. you eat! Therefore,maintaining a healthy diet not only 5.(provide)your body with energy but also numerous health benefits.One is that you will keep a healthy weight and is also the easiest and most 6.(benefit)way in which you can be energetic and protect yourself 7.a number of diseases when growing old.Another benefit is that you will meet your everyday nutritional (require) 8.. 9.(Basic)speaking,you should ensure that you take good amount of vegetables,grains,milk and proteins.In most cases,a healthy diet can help you decrease the risk of 10.(get)some diseases like diabetes and cancer.
Michael’s phone contains a picture of masses of groceries—from pies to ground meat—all packed tightly into a car.All of it was taken to Mary’s Mission,a for the homeless,last Thanksgiving,he explained.
“Till now, we’ve delivered 21,000 pounds of food that would have been ,”said Michael,18,a high school graduate from Illinois.
Last summer, Michael started a called Unseen Cuisine.It food that is nearly past its sell—by date from business,and delivers it to shelters for the homeless. their senior year, Michael and eight other students up for three deliveries a week to nearby shelters.
Now those students hope to the mission at the universities they are attending in the fall and get more students .
“The ultimate goal for us is to end food waste and end ,not only in America but50the whole world,”Michael said.“I know that’s pretty ”
During a family trip to India in the summer of 2012,Michael said he was by seeing people beg in the streets.That image with him.
But Michael and his team have been honored for their work,he said his team had been most by their interactions(交流)with people who live and work at the shelters.
They said they had come to a new of their privilege and responsibility toward others.“A lot of people didn’t necessarily to be in the position that they’re in.It’s a lot of 58 wherever you’re born,”said Nick Motta,1 8,one of Michael’S teammates.
“To me,it's amazing that a group of students can make such a ”Michael said.“If we can just keep doing that.I think it will go a long way.”
1.A.store B.shelter C.school D.factory
2.A.produced B.bought C.wasted D.stolen
3.A.pub B.class C.family D.group
4.A.collects B.sells C.makes D.cooks
5.A.Before B.After C.Throughout D.Until
6.A.held B.turned C.made D.teamed
7.A.spread B.1imit C.support D.delay
8.A.known B.involved C.united D.started
9.A.poverty B.violence C.injustice D.hunger
10.A.hopefully B.thankfully C.fortunately D.apparently
11.A.affordable B.aggressive C.ambitious D.arbitrary
12.A.frightened B.affected C.embarrassed D.disappointed
13.A.met B.stayed C.agreed D.matched
14.A.when B.as C.since D.while
15.A.awarded B.comforted C.rewarded D.favored
16.A.understanding B.analyzing C.balancing D.expressing
17.A.fail B.fight C.manage D.choose
18.A.freedom B.1uck C.courage D.wisdom
19.A.pretty B.well C.rather D.even
20.A.point B.breakthrough C.difference D.decision
Many students have to live with roommates while going to school or university.Having a roommate can be one of the best experiences,or easily one ofthe worst. 1.
Follow these five tips to avoid the common mistakes that make good roommate relationships worse.
Talk things out. 2. If something happens,sit down with your roommates and have a face-to-face conversation.Complaining about your roommates behind their backs creates nothing but awkward situations and general unhappiness.
3. Some roommates become the best of friends,and some don’t.Don’t put pressure on yourself or your roommate to reach this level,especially when you first meet.Remember,you are trying to make a new friend,not scare your roommate away.And if your roommate doesn’t end up being your best friend,there is no need to worry about it.
Clean up after yourself.Or at least,keep your mess on your side. 4. But being considerate with where you put your own stuff will help you avoid the arguments.
Ask before you take.This applies to food,clothes,supplies and anything else that you don’t own. 5.Even if you both agree to share everything you should still ask.
A.Don’t expect to be best friends.
B.Communication is of vital importance.
C.You don’t need to keep the room clean and organized all the time.
D.Rooms can be really easy for a mess to pile up.
E.If you want to have a good relationship with your roommate,it all starts with you.
F.Not all roommates can become your best friends.
G.Show your roommate that you have respect for his or her belongings.
Georgia Aquarium is open 365 days a year. Please note that hours of operation do vary.Last ticket sold and entry is 30 minutes before closing time.
Regular Hours
Sunday—Friday:10 a.m.—5 P.m.
Saturday:9 a.m.—6 p.m.
Summer Hours:May 27-August 16
Monday-Saturday:9 a.m.—9 P.m.
Sunday:9 a.m.—6 p.m.
Full Price Total Ticket
Adult(ages 13-64):$38.95
Child(ages 3-12):$32.95
Senior(age 65+):$34.95
Total Ticket Online Discount
Adult(ages 13-64):$35.95
Child(ages 3-12):$29.95
Senior(age 65+):$31.95
Animal Encounters:$59.95
Beluga&Friends Interactive Program:$179.95
Journey with Gentle Giants Immersion Program:$234.95
AT&T Dolphin Tales
Our new dolphin gallery, theater and show are now open.The gallery and viewing window are open to general admission guests periodically throughout the day.Show times vary each day, so check for times when you are purchasing general admission tickets.Don’t forget-AT&T Dolphin Tales is included in Total Ticket general admission,so don’t miss this spectacular show !
4D Theater—Deepo’s Undersea 3D Wondershow Presented by AT&T
With multiple shows throughout the day,be sure to catch this unique experience at Georgia Aquarium.Admission to the 4D Theater is included in Total Ticket general admission!
Journey with Gentle Giants Immersion Program
Swim or scuba dive in the Ocean Voyager exhibit,built by The Home Depot.Swims are daily at 4:30 p.m.,and scuba dives are daily at 3 p.m.and Saturday and Sunday at ll a.m.Spots are limited,so it’s best to book in advance.
Beluga&Friends Interactive Program
Interact with belugas and harbor seals in the Georgia-Pacific Cold Water Quest gallery.This animal interaction occurs daily at 10 a.m.and 1:30 p.m.Spots are limited,so it’s best to book in advance.
Animal Encounters
Interact with a penguin daily at l1:30 a.m.and l:45 p.m.You can also experience a special encounter with a dolphin.Spots are limited,so it’s best to book in advance.
1.How much can they save if grandparents in their seventies with a 10-year-old boy visit Georgia Aquarium with online tickets?
A.$3. B.$6. C.$9. D.$12
2.Which of the following about AT&T Dolphin Tales is TRUE?
A.It is open all day long to visitors.
B.It is really worth watching for visitors.
C.Visitors have to pay extra money to watch it.
D.visitors should book their tickets in advance.
3.With a Total Ticket,visitors are allowed to visit________.
A.Animal Encounters
B.Beluga&Friends Interactive Program
C.4D Theater-Deepo’s Undersea 3D Wondershow
D.Journey with Gentle Giants Immersion Program
A public primary school in New York City has stopped giving its students homework.
P.S.116 Principal Jane Hsu wrote a letter to parents last month explaining that after more than a year of analyzing studies,the school had concluded that students’after-school time would be better spent on activities like reading at their own pace and playing rather than working on homework.
Hsu’s letter says that many studies indicate that there is no connection between homework and academic success.Indeed,there are some studies that show that the link between homework and success is doubtful at the primary school level.
An important 1989 study on homework by Professor Cooper found that doing homework led students to perform better in school as they grew older.In later grades,students who did homework performed increasingly better than students who did not.In 2006,Cooper published a study that analyzed 15 years’worth of data on the effectiveness of homework.He found that homework had a more positive impact on students as they aged,and identified stronger relations between homework and achievement for students in grades seven through 12 than for students in kindergarten through sixth grade.
A 2012 study from the Indiana University School of Education on 10th-graders found little relation between time spent on homework and better course grades,although it did find a positive relation between homework time and standardized test performance.
Some parents of P.S.116 students are not happy with the decision to eliminate homework.
“I think they should have homework—some of it is about discipline.I want(my daughter)to have fun,but I also want her to be working towards a goal,”Daniel Tasman,the father of a second—grader at the schoo1.
“You have to do homework in order to gain;you have to do homework because they may not be able to comprehend everything in school,”Sharon Blake,a grandmother of a P.S.116 student.
1.Principal Jane Hsu wrote the letter to the parents to_________.
A.analyze the test results of the students
B.suggest students’reading at their own pace and playing
C.tell them about the conclusion of the research
D.give them the reason for the decision of the school
2.The decision to stop giving students homework depends upon________.
A.studies on the link between homework and academic success
B.students’wish to spend their time on activities or playing
C.Professor Cooper’s research on the effectiveness of homework
D.the ideas of both school authorities and parents
3.Harris Cooper found in his research that________.
A.kindergarten students spent too much time doing activities
B.doing homework made the kindergarten students cleverer
C.only elderly students should be given homework to do
D.students benefit more from doing homework as they grow older
4.What does the underlined word“eliminate”in Paragraph 6 mean?
A.Refuse. B.Cancel. C.Increase. D.Reduce.