Question

假设从外地转来一名同学张宁到你班里，他一时无法融入新的班集体中，感到很苦恼。

请根据下列要点用英语给他写一封信：

1．帮他分析原因

2．给他提出建议

3．陈述你帮助他的具体打算

作适当发挥，使行文连贯。

词数：120左右

Dear Zhang Ning，

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Best regards，

Yours，

Li Hua

Answer

Dear_Zhang_Ning，

I know you are now having trouble communicating with others, and you may often feel lonely. That's because you are new here and people don't know about you. But I think you can make it if you can follow the advice below.

First, you should take an active part in the discussions and show your own opinion about the matters and at the same time, learn to listen to other people's views. Second, you should learn about your classmates' likes and dislikes. Then you can have much in common with them. This way, you can get to know more different people and show them that you are just as friendly. Last but not least, I'm always here ready to help. We can take part in some activities together and I can introduce you to others.

With time going on, people will know you better and will like to make friends with you if you can do as the above.

Best_regards，

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：考查半开放性作文。本文要求给张宁写信，告诉他如何融入新的环境。原因可以从周围同学的方面和自己适应能力两方面展开。可以建议他多参加各种班级的活动，多和周围的同学交流等方面展开说明。要求考生在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象，进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法，增添了写作的灵活性，同时能较好地考查考生的想象能力和英语语言表达能力

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语take an active part in积极参加；at the same time同时；introduce sb to sb 把某人介绍给某人；That's because you are new here and people don't know about you.这个句子运用到because引导的表语从句；This way, you can get to know more different people and show them that you are just as friendly这个句子运用that引导show的宾语从句；With time going on, people will know you better and will like to make friends with you if you can do as the above这个句子中运用到with的复合结构；

考点： 提纲类作文