Question

请根据下列提示要点，以“The Ways to Keep Healthy” 为题，写一篇短文。

提示：

1. 人人都想保持健康。

2．饮食要健康：多吃水果、蔬菜，因为它们富含纤维素和维生素；少吃黄油(butter)、奶酪(cheese)、咖啡和巧克力，因为它们含糖和脂肪太多，糖和脂肪使你迅速变胖。

3．有良好的生活习惯：定期锻炼，充足的睡眠，不要过度劳累，不抽烟等等。

要求：

1. 短文须包括上述所有要点，可以适当增加细节,使短文连贯。

2．词数约100左右。

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer

Everyone hopes to be in good health. But how? Here are some ways to keep healthy.

First, you need a healthy diet. It is better to eat fresh fruit and vegetables because they have a lot of fibre and vitamins. Don’t eat the food which contains too much sugar and fat, like butter, cheese, coffee and chocolate. Fat and sugar make people put on weight easily.

Second, good living habits are very important. You should do regular exercise to build up your body. Besides, enough rest is necessary for your health. You need 8 hours’ sleep a night and don’t work too hard. Smoking is a bad habit, so never smoke.

In a word, healthy food and good living habits are good ways to keep healthy.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达属于说明文，根据题目要求和提示信息说明保持健康的方法和途径。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、严格按照题目要求，不遗漏要点，将文章分层次，简明扼要的陈述观点；3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如，本文采用三段式，层次更清晰，语义更明确，容易理解；使用了First, Second,Besides,In a word,等连词，使文章层次清晰，语言连贯；Don’t eat the food which contains too much sugar and fat, like butter, cheese, coffee and chocolate.是which引导的定语从句；It is better to eat fresh fruit and vegetables because they have a lot of fibre and vitamins. 是because引导的原因状语从句；so never smoke.使用了so it do表示“...也是”。

考点：考查说明文阅读