Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线(—)，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

My brother, he would do some paperwork in a company, went to a remote village to participate the voluntary activity last month. So my mother was worried about that he could adjust himself to living there. She was dying to hearing from him. Later he told my mother he had fitted in well with the villagers there. However, he told them that a terrible accident had happened. The other day he, who was scared to dead, was about to attend a party while he witnessed it. Worse still, the car fled from the scene. Firstly he called, urged the doctors to rush to the spot and then he gave first aid to the injured. Eventually the injured man was lucky helped out of danger.

I am proud of him, who is occupying himself with his work and devotes himself to helping those in the need.

Answer

1.he-who

2.加in

3.that-whether

4.hearing-hear

5.them-us

6.dead-death

7.while-when

8.urged-urging

9.lucky-luckily

10.去掉the

【解析】

试题分析：本文讲述的是我的哥哥在山村参加的一次志愿活动。他轻松地适应了山区的艰苦生活，在一次去参加酒席的路上，他碰到一位车祸中受伤的人，经过他的全力救治，那位伤者幸存下来了，我为有这样一位乐于奉献的哥哥感到骄傲。

1.he-who 考查定语从句。My brother,who would do some paperwork in a company, went to a remote……，原本在一家公司工作的哥哥去参加志愿者活动了。这里修饰人的定语从句要用who。故改为who。

2.加in 考查固定短语。Participate in the voluntary activity last month.参加志愿者活动。Participate in意为参加。故加in。

3.that-whether 考查宾语从句。So my mother was worried about whether he could adjust himself to living there.我的妈妈担心他能否适应那里的生活。Worry about +whether宾语从句，意为担心……怎么样。故改为whether。

4.hearing-hear 考查不定式用法。She was dying to hear from him.我妈妈渴望收到他的来信。Be dying to do sth渴望做某事。To后面接动词原形，故改为hear。

5.them-us 考查宾格形式。However, he told them that a terrible accident had happened.然而他告诉了我们一个可怕的意外。“我们”的宾格是us.故改为us。

6.dead-death 考查固定搭配。The other day he, who was scared to death，be scared to death吓得要死，故改为death。

7.while-when 考查时间状语。The other day he, who was scared to death, was about to attend a party when he witnessed it.一天当他去参加酒席当他看到了一场严重的车祸，吓得要死。While表示两个动作同时进行，when表示时间状语。故改为when。

8.urged-urging 考查独立主格结构。Firstly he called, urging the doctors to rush to the spot and then he gave first aid to the injured.他第一时间给救护车打电话，然后救治来了伤者。主语都是“he”,在第二个句子里可以省略主语，如果动词与主语是主动关系，把谓语动词改为ing形式。故改为urging。

9.lucky-luckily 考查副词。eventually the injured man was lucky helped out of danger.最后伤者幸运脱险。用副词修饰动词，用luckily修饰was helped out,故改为luckily。

10.

考点：考查固定短语、语法知识