Question

现在城市交通拥堵严重，请写一篇文章列出原因及对策。要点如下：

1．原因（私家车过多，公共交通设施不完善……）；

2．对策(重视科学的道路设计，加强公共交通，……)；

注意：1．词数100左右；

2．参考词汇：公共交通 public transportation

（不）科学的道路设计 （unscientific）scientific road design

Answer

Almost every city has some big traffic problems and no single reason can contribute to it. Besides a large population, we also have increasing private cars and unscientific road design, all of which can lead to traffic accidents and traffic jam .

Although more roads have been built and some roads are broadened, without reasonable road design the traffic jam and accidents are not likely to be avoided. Besides, if some broken roads are not repaired in time, they will slow the flow of the traffic, especially at rush hours. What’s more, it is advisable to promote the advanced public transportation. We should open up more bus routes and to equip the bus with advanced transportation monitoring system. If a person can take a bus conveniently and safely anywhere and anytime with less expense, who likes to drive the costly cars?

【解析】

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