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请修改下面的短文。短文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处语言错误仅涉及...

请修改下面的短文。短文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处语言错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(满分5 manfen5.com),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。 2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

My name is Michelle Kwan. When I was five year old, I began skating. I skate several hours a day every day of the week. When I was 13, I was performed at my first National Championships. But it was a disappointed performance, made me very upset. I decided to work even hard. The next year, I won the second place. After that, I went on to winning a silver medal at the 1998 Olympics and my world championships. I still practice every day. How? Because I know it takes great effort to reach top and stay there. If you want to achieve something great, work hard enough and you will make them.

 

1.year改为years 2.skate改为skated 3.去掉was 4.disappointed改为disappointing 5.made改为making/made前面加上which 6.hard改为harder 7.winning改为win 8.How改为Why 9.reach后面加上the 10.them改为it 【解析】 试题分析:作者很喜欢滑冰,但是在第一次锦标赛时作者表现得不尽人意,但是作者并没有因此灰心,而是继续努力,最后取得了不错的成绩。 1.year改为years,考查单复数。句意:当我五岁的时候。这里五岁应该是five years old,所以将year改为years。 2.skate改为skated,考查时态。句意:我每个星期每天都会滑几个小时。这是讲作者以前的事情,所以使用一般过去时,所以将skate改为skated。 3.去掉was,考查谓语。句意:当我13岁的时候,我在我的第一个国际锦标赛上表演。这里有两个谓语,was和performed,此句中表达的是“表演”,所以去掉was。 4.disappointed改为disappointing,考查现在分词。句意:但是这是一个让人失望的表演,让我很沮丧。disappointed一般是人做主语,表示“感到失望的”,而disappointing是事物做主语,表示“令人失望的”,所以将disappointed改为disappointing。 5.made改为making/made前面加上which,考查定语从句。句意:但是这是一个让人失望的表演,让我很沮丧。这里是后半句没有主语,可以将made改为making,用动名词做主语,或者在made前面加上which,改为which引导的定语从句,所以将made改为making/made前面加上which。 6.hard改为harder,考查形容词比较级。句意:我决定更加刻苦地练习。这里表达的是比之前更加刻苦,故应该用比较级,所以将hard改为harder。 7.winning改为win,考查to的用法。句意:在那之后,我连续在1998届奥运会和世界锦标赛上获得银牌。这里to是不定式,不定式后面应该用动词原形,所以将winning改为win。 8.How改为Why,考查副词。句意:我仍然每天练习。为什么?因为我知道要达到顶峰并且保持要付出极大的努力。从后面的because可以推断出这里是询问原因,所以将How改为Why。 9.reach后面加上the,考查冠词的用法。句意:我仍然每天练习。为什么?因为我知道要达到顶峰并且保持要付出极大的努力。达到顶峰应该是on the top,这里the表示特指,所以在reach后面加上the。 10. 考点:考查语法和改错
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