Question

短文改错(共10小题; 每小题1分，满分10分)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

While Joe left university, he got a good job in a bike factory. After he had worked there for some years, he decided to have change. But he put a notice in several newspapers, saying what experiences he had and the kind of job he would like to have. One of the answers he accepted was from a man looked for a job, too. This man wrote to him, “Dear sir, when you get a new job, to be kind enough to give my name and address to your present boss，as I have been trying to find a position like you for a long time.” After he reads the letter, he suddenly realized what he had done was real foolish.

Answer

1.While →When/After

2.在change前加a

3.But→So

4.experiences→experience

5.accepted→received

6.looked→looking

7.to be kind 中to去掉

8.you→yours

9.reads→read

10.real→really

【解析】

试题分析：考查动词名词等的掌握情况

1.While →When/After考查副词。While通常意思为然而，同时，所以这里用When/After更加合适。

2.在change前加a考查冠词。Change在这里作名词使用，所以需要加冠词a。

3.But→So考查连词。前后文是因果关系，所以用so。

4.experiences→experience考查名词。作经验解释时是不可数的， 作经历解释时是可数的，这里做经历，所以用experience。

5.accepted→received考查动词。receive只表示被动地接受accept总表示主动而且高兴地接受，所以这里用received。

6.looked→looking考查时态。根据后文可知这消息正在念，所以用进行时looking。

7.to be kind 中to去掉考查祈使句。这里是一个祈使句也就是无主句，动词原型开头，所以去掉to。

8.you→yours考查名词性无助代词。这里的yours= your position所以用yours。

9.reads→read考查时态。这里用一般过去时，所以用过去式read。

10.→really考查副词。因为后面有形容词修饰，所以这里用副词修饰。

考点：考查短文改错