Question

短文改错（共10处错误； 每处错误1分， 共10分）

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Last Saturday，our school had organized an activity to visit the children at a local orphanage．As one of the volunteer，I took part in it．We took many books as well many kinds of school supplies and toys for the children．They were delighted to receive the gifts．In the morning，we played some games with them when we used to play in our childhood．Then we cooked and had lunch here．In the afternoon，we gave them some performances．Before leaving the orphanage，we had photos take with them and gave them our contact details so that they could keep in touch with one another．Each of us had a happily time．We gave the children our care and help，but in return，they gave us their smiles and love．

Answer

1.去掉had

2.volunteer→volunteers

3.加as

4.for→to

5.when→that/which

6.here→there

7.take→taken

8.they→we

9.happily→happy

10.but→and

【解析】

试题分析：上个周六我们去拜访了孤儿院，我们和那边的孩子玩耍，度过了一段快乐的时光。

1.去掉had 考查时态。时间是Last Saturday，是过去时，所以去掉had 。

2.volunteer→volunteers 考查名词。one of表示其中之一，后接可数名词复数 ，所以用volunteers 。

3.加as 考查连词。As well as表示同样也，固定搭配，故加as。

4.for→to考查介词。Take sth to sb给某人带某物，故用to

5.when→that/which考查关系词。指代some games，是物体，不是时间，可用that/which 。

6.here→there 考查副词。那儿，我们在那儿煮饭，故用there。

7.take→taken 考查动词时态。Have sth done，某事被做，主语photos与动词之间是被动关系，用taken。

8.they→we 考查代词。这样我们可以互相联系，所以用we。

9.happily→happy 考查形容词。修饰名词time用形容词，用happy 。

10.

考点：考查了动词、介词、代词、名词、形容词、时态等的用法