Question

高三同学面临沉重的升学压力，因此，很多同学课间休息时间也坐在教室里学习，但效果并不理想。就此，班主任准备开一次班会课，以劝诫这些同学：适当的休息很有必要。现请你以“The Ten-minute Break Between Classes”为题，按以下要求写一篇英语短文，让这些同学从中受到启发。要点如下：

十分钟的课间休息很有必要；

这段时间学习效果并不理想；

你是如何利用这十分钟休息时间的。

注意：词数120字左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。

The Ten-minute Break Between Classes

Time seems to be so limited for us Senior Three Students.

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Answer

The Ten-minute Break Between Classes

Time seems to be limited for us Senior Three students. As a result, more and more students try to study from early morning till late afternoon, even during the ten-minute break. In my opinion, taking a ten-minute break between classes is necessary. Otherwise, we will feel tired both physically and mentally.

During the ten-minute break, we should do something to get rid of tiredness. What we need is to have a real rest, instead of getting more tired. So doing nothing tiring in that period is really good for us.

My ten-minute break is always pleasing. Sometimes I do some simple exercises. Sometimes I have a free chat with my classmates or just take a walk outside. When the next class begins, I feel fresh again.

【解析】

试题分析：本文考查了提纲类短文写作，所考话题与考生的实际生活很贴近。只是给出了一个大概的纲要，仍然需要考生仔细筛选要点，做适当的补充。在写作的时候要使用合适的连接词如first of all, otherwise, As far as I am concerned等来连接整个文章，使之成为一个整体。选择词汇的时候也要选择一些高级的词汇和多变的短语让这个文章充满变化，更有层次。提纲类短文写作的关键在于要点的覆盖要全面，不能有任何的遗漏，在组织语言的时候也要注意运用合适的连接词来组织串联全文，使之成为整体。特别注意谚语的运用，合适的谚语可以给文章增加文采。

【亮点说明】文章要点齐全，表达思路明确，知识点运用恰当到位，文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如As a result结果是，from...till...从...到....，In my opinion在我看来，Otherwise不然的话，get rid of摆脱，instead of而不是，代替....，What we need is to have a real rest是一句名词性从句，When the next class begins, I feel fresh again.是一句时间状语从句。

考点：考查提纲类作文