Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（# )，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改_:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意_:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词(    )

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear John，

Long time no see. I was so delight to receive your letter and I’d like to sharing something with you about my school. There was no doubt that more than one change has been taken place in my school.

A new library has been built，that there are varieties of books，newspapers and maga­zine. Besides，lie in the front of my school，the wonderful playground makes the campus more surprising beautiful. In addition，ours teachers and we students have planted many splendid flowers and trees in our school.

I sincerely wish you could come and visit my school the near future.

Yours

Li Hua

Answer

1.delight → delighted

2.sharing → share

3.was → is

4.been去掉

5.that → where

6.magazine → magazines

7.lie → lying

8.surprising → surprisingly

9.ours → our

10.school 和the 之间加in

【解析】

试题分析：本文通过阅读关于介绍校园变化的短文，考查学生对固定搭配，动词时态和语态，名词的单复数问题，以及代词介词的辨别和运用。

1.delight → delighted 考查形容词；was后用形容词表示心情，delighted 高兴的，delight名词，高兴。

2.sharing → share 考查动词； would like to 后面用动词原形share。

3.was → is 考查时态一致。这里说现在的状况，应该用一般现在时，用is。

4.been去掉 考查语态。动词短语take place 发生，相当于不及物动词，没有被动语态，所以要去掉been。

5.that → where 考查非限制性定语从句的关系词。用 where 在从句中做状语，意思是：图书馆中有各种各样的书籍，报纸和杂志。that不是非限制性定语从句的关系词。

6.magazine → magazines 考查名词。magazine是可数名词，和前面的 books，newspapers 并列，所以用复数形式magazines。

7.lie → lying 考查非谓语动词做状语。操场在学校的前面，使校园更加漂亮。lie的逻辑主语是后面的主语，所以用它的-ing形式做状语。

8.surprising → surprisingly 考查副词。 通常是副词修饰形容词，这里beautiful是形容词，所以应该用副词形式surprisingly。

9.ours → our 考查代词。ours是名词性物主代词，后面不用名词，teachers在后，前面应该用形容词性物主代词our。

10.school 和the 之间加in 考查介词。in the near future意思是：在不久的将来。

考点：短文改错。