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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处价格漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起),不计分。

In the winter vacation, I paid a visit a mountain village in a suburb of Luoyang. No sooner had I got off the bus when I was greatly surprising to see all the changes. It was far better than I had been expected. Now every family can drink cleanly running water. The villagers needn’t carry water himself any more. Firewood is no longer used for cooking. Marsh gas, a new cheap clean energy, make it very convenient to cook and light. As all the families have color TV set, they can enjoy plays at home. It impressed me most was that the best building in a village was the school. I hope the mountain village will become better and better.

 

1.visit后加to 2.when改为than 3.surprising改为surprised 4.been去掉 5.cleanly改为clean 6.himself改为themselves 7.第八句make改为makes; 8.set改为sets; 9.It改为What 10.a改为the 【解析】 1. 考查固定搭配:pay a visit to对---的访问,故在visit后加to。 2. 固定句式:no sooner---than---一---就---,故把when改为than。 3. 句意:我看到这些变化感到非常惊讶。所以把surprising改为surprised。 4. 句意:这远远超过我的预测。此处表示主动形式,故把been去掉。 5. 句意:干净的自来水。形容词修饰名词,故把cleanly改为clean。 6. 句意:村民们不再自己挑水,是复数形式,故把himself改为themselves。 7. 句意:沼气是一种便宜又干净的新能源,它使做饭和照明更方便。根据句意可知用一般现在时态,故把make改为makes。 8. 根据句意可知此处用复数形式,故把set改为sets。 9. 句意:给我留下印象最深刻的是在这个村子里最好的建筑物是学校。此处考查主语从句,主语从句缺少主语和引导词,故把It改为What。 10. 句意:在这个村子里最好的建筑物是学校。故把a改为the。 考点:考查短文改错 【名师点拨】 1.短文改错要注意固定搭配:比如第一句中I paid a visit a mountain village in a suburb of Luoyang。visit后面缺少一个介词to,pay a visit to---,对---的访问。这类短语常见的还有:a trip to---对---的一次旅行;the entrance to--- ---的入口;the key to--- ----的钥匙,---的关键,---的重点。比如第二句中No sooner had I got off the bus when I was greatly surprising to see all the changes.把when改成than.固定句式:no sooner---than---,一---就---;hardly---when---一---就---。这两个句式的主句都用过去完成时态,从句都用一般过去时态;当no sooner和hardly位于句子开头是,主句用部分倒装。 2.what引导名词性从句的用法。 这篇改错的倒数第二句It impressed me most was that the best building in a village was the school. 此处考查主语从句,主语从句缺少主语和引导词,what起双重作用,故把It改为What。 (1)引导主语从句 1)What we need is moretime.(what做need的宾语)我们所需要的是更多的时间.2)Whatreally matters is that shewore a pair of whiteshoes.(what做matters的主语)真正麻烦的是她穿了一双白鞋. (2)引导宾语从句 1)People were perhaps more honest a long time ago when life was very different from what itistoday.(what做从句中is的表语)很久以前当生活与现在的生活完全不同时,人们或许更诚实.2)People have heard what the President has said; they are waiting to see what he will do.(what分别做动词heard和see的宾语)人们已经听到了总统所说的;他们正等着看总统会做什么. (3)引导表语从句 1)Whether ways will be found to stop pollution or not is just what worries the public.(what做从句中的主语)是否能找到阻止污染的方法就是所令民众担心的事儿.2)That is what I want to tell you.(what做从句中的宾语)那就是我想告诉你的事儿.3)The little girl is no longer what she used to be.(what做从句中的表语)这个小女孩不再是过去的样子了. (4)引导同位语从句 1)They have no idea at all what he is working on.(what做从句的宾语)他们一点儿都不知道他正在做什么.2)You have no idea what I suffered.(what做从句的宾语)你不知道我所遭受的痛苦.通过以上例句及解释我们可以得出:what常用来引导名词性从句,即主语从句,宾语从句,表语从句和同位语从句.what在引导名词性从句时有两个重要的特点:一是它在相应的名词性从句中一定有含义,常表示“什么”,“所…的”,“…的样子”等.二是它在相应的名词性从句中一定做成分,而且常做主语,宾语或表语.
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