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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除: 把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改: 在错词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Yesterday I showed to my friend Peter around Beijing city. We started off at 8:00 a.m. First we went to the Forbidden City, which was one of the most popular tourist spot in Beijing. Then we visited the History Museum. We observed a lot of valuable things in them and we learned a lot about Chinese history. After a quick meal, we went to Beihai Park. Upon arrival, we were all struck by its beautiful scenes. We spent a whole afternoon appreciated the wonder. It was until 18:00 p. m. that we went back.

We did have a wonderful time. Peter was very pleased with my arrangement that he invited me to a new-built western restaurant to have a big meal.

 

1.去掉to 2.was→is 3.spot→spots 4.them→it 5.all→both 6.a→the 7.appreciated→appreciating 8.was后面加not 9.very→so 10.new-built→newly-built 【解析】 试题分析:文章介绍作者带朋友Peter参观北京一些名胜的事情。 1.去掉to 使用词组show sb. around sp.“带某人参观某地”。故去掉to。 2.was→is 考查时态。句意:紫禁城是北京最受欢迎的旅游景点。这是客观事实。用一般现在时。故was改成is。 3.spot→spots 考查名词的数。 one of后面接可数名词的复数。故spot用复数。 4.them→it 考查代词。根据上文Then we visited the History Museum.可知这句话的意思是:我们在里面看了很多有价值的东西。用it指代the History Museum。 5.all→both 考查不定代词。根据上文Yesterday I showed to my friend Peter around Beijing city.可知作者是和Peter去参观的。all“三者以上都”,both“两者都”。故all改成both。 6.a→the 考查冠词。句意:我们花了一整个下午欣赏这个奇观。这里是特指“昨天下午”,用定冠词the。 7.appreciated→appreciating 考查动名词。使用词组spend time doing sth.花时间做某事。 8.was后面加not 使用强调句It was not until…that…“直到……才……”。 9.9】very→so 使用so…that…句型。句意:Peter是如此满意我的安排,以致于他邀请我去一个新建的西餐厅吃大餐。修饰pleased用so。 10.10】new-built→newly-built 考查复合形容词。“新建成的”newly-built,因为修饰动词built用副词。 【方法点拨】 短文改错题检测考生发现、判断、纠正文章错误的能力.进而考察学生的词法、句法及行文逻辑等方面的水平,考查学生在语篇中综合运用英语的能力。 短文改错解题思路和检查原则: 1.句中各部分的结构是否完整,特别是每个句子要有动词; 2. 谓语动词的时态、语态; 3.非谓语动词的用法; 4.名词的单、复数,格的使用是否正确; 5.定冠词和不定冠词是否正确; 6.代词的格和性的使用是否有误; 7.定语从句中关系代词、副词是否准确无误; 8.并列句中的并列连词、主从复合句中的从属连词用的是否得当。 例如:本题中的 11.去掉to 是短语搭配错误。 12.was→is 是时态错误。 13.spot→spots 是名词单复数错误。 14.them→it 是代词指代出现问题。 15.all→both 是近义代词的区别。 16.a→the 是冠词使用错误。 17.appreciated→appreciating 是短语搭配错误。 18.was后面加not 属于强调句结构错误。 19.9】very→so 属于句型搭配错误。 20.10】new-built→newly-built 属于副词和形容词的区别。 考点:考查短文改错
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