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假设你叫李华,是一家英文杂志社的心理咨询师。某中学生小王给你写信,提到自己偏胖,想节食减肥,征求你的意见。请你给她回一封信,谈谈你对该问题的见解。内容要点如下:

1. 健康比漂亮重要

2. 学生以学习为主,不要过于注重外貌和别人的看法

3. 可以通过多锻炼身体来保持健康,要改变不良的饮食习惯

4. 健康的心态也很重要

注意:1. 短文必须包括所有内容要点,可适当发挥

2. 词数:100左右        3.参考词汇: state of mind 心态

 

Dear Xiao Wang,

I have received and read your letter, in which you mentioned that you wanted to lose weight by dieting.____________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

 

Dear Xiao Wang, I have received and read your letter, in which you mentioned that you wanted to lose weight by dieting. It is only natural that young girls at your age hope to look beautiful. However, in my opinion, health is more important than beauty. For a student, studying is the first thing to consider while appearance is the second. So do not let others’ opinions affect your normal life. However, if you do want to lose weight, it is a good idea to do it by getting more exercise and changing your unhealthy eating habits. The most important thing is that you keep a healthy state of mind, as it will help with your studies, and will also help you overcome difficulties in dieting. I hope my advice will be helpful to you and I’m looking forward to your next letter. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 试题分析:这是一篇书信,文章开头结尾已经给出,只需要表达清楚要点。写作时首先要注意文章的段落结构,因为这是回信,所以第一段应该交代上封信的内容,要解答的问题。第二段主要是给出笔者的建议。第三段总结。其中第二段是重点。 亮点说明:范文在表达要点时避免了逐字逐句翻译,避免了汉语式的表达,用了地道的英语句型,还使用了一些常用短语,符合英语习惯。如:I have received and read your letter, in which you mentioned that you wanted to lose weight by dieting.这是非限制性定语从句的用法。还有It is only natural that young girls at your age hope to look beautiful. /it is a good idea to do it by getting more exercise and changing unhealthy eating habits, it作形式主语也是英语中常用的句型。studying is the first thing to consider while appearance is the second.这句话中,while的用法也很巧妙。另外名词性从句也是英语写作中常用的,如:The most important thing is that you keep a healthy state of mind。我们在写作中要熟练的运用这些常用句型,而且要经常尝试不同的表达法,不能千篇一律,才能写出好的文章。 考点:书信类作文  
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定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

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5.A.asked             B. decided     C. forgot        D. heard

6.A.made              B. let          C. told         D. considered

7.A.notice            B. message   C. book          D. question

8.A.class            B. room         C. office        D. lab

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